Jessica Marie Williams wrote:
I'd appreciate one toooo!

Here ya go JMW

> dreamy dreamy


> hot hot


You give some real nice looks on your page, looks like you take direction well - and take to the styling well too.

Strongest images - 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 (love 6), 9, 10, 11, 16, 17, 19

Weakest:
3, just not as good as 2
13 - cute, but not over the top cute - which is what you want for that kind of shot
15 - awkward set up, not flattering to you
18 - you just look kind of bored really


Well done, cheers >

jeffreyLEESERphoto wrote:

kool


sweet


Some good variety of setting, you have a nice eye for that.
And some nice light captures too, 3, 4, 6, 7, 12, 19

17-18 are a little too contrasty, 16 is a little flat.

And i like 2 & 4 on page 2


I really like the feel of shot 4 on page 1, I just wish she had a more fun/light expression - the setting is so pretty - and she looks she is trying to remember when her car inspection needs to get done. If you have  shot from that series with a smile - post it!


> take care !

Thank you very much for actually sticking in there and getting around to me. You sure bit off a big bite by offering to do this and its not often that you see these go much further than page 5 or 6.
Again thank you.
Dan

JIC Photography  wrote:

Look at you man... Amazing work!!! Why do you even need my opinion.. You know you are good... Love the shots, concepts, lighting, Models very nice!!!! Keep shooting and  send some of those models up north...


JOHN

Awww shucks.   Thanks John

jeffreyLEESERphoto wrote:

I like 2, 7, 9

the last shot, to be honest - no one will take you seriously if you have that on there.
Just keep the good stuff.

You will need some better studio shots, see what you can get going for TF.

Best of luck >

Thanks you for your time!  I agree with you on the last one...I originally had it on there to add a little humor...but now it's hit the trash can!

Keep on being amazing! 

jeffreyLEESERphoto wrote:

AHHH - my bad - just went right to the pix this time, I do try to check the bio first - I SUCK!

but.....kind of the same as far as my thoughts the first time - get in close when you shoot.

Start off pulled back, get the scene - see if you like it - then move in closer with every 2nd or 3rd shot, till you are right in there, model filling the frame of the shot.
When you look at all your photos from the shoot, you will know what worked best when you see it.

And change up the settings if you can, get some more color in there too.

Sorry about the mix up Robert

thanks for critiquing my stuff, that series is the first shoot with a model that i've done so any advice is greatly appreciated. learning studio lighting right now so hopefully my portfolio will get better with the new skills gained from that.

jeffreyLEESERphoto wrote:

hi
Taking into account what you describe as your interests - here is what i like best.
shots #1, 2, 8, 12, 15, 19

If you like the darker - go for it, get dark!


More like this one, kool shot - try some more setting/theme shots.

later!

Thank you, I appreciate it. 

Lauren Currie wrote:
Please critique me.
Thank you

> kool shot


> your best looks - sleek & confident



You carry a consistent quality level in your posing, and you take to the styling very nicely. You look good outside & in.

Major problem, while the double & triple shot series images can be nice & offer you more looks, too many and you don't have enough strong single images of yourself that capture the viewer instantly - like a great single image can.

I am curious to see if you could re-post #5 or 12, with just one of those images, not the series.

Otherwise - you are there, great work

> cheers

Eric wrote:
Looks like you have your work cut out for you but if you don't get burned out by this point I'd love to have a critique.

> eye catchy


> bright & clean


Good sense of color in the studio, some nice scenic shots too - the darker shots in settings, have a nice composed feel to them.

Maybe a few too many straight shots of models in studio with gray background - too many weaken the overall quality.
And that 2nd shot on page 2, really stood out in a bad way - depression or sadness are emotions worth putting into image, but this one is flat - either make it even more hearth wrenching - or don't use it - it just hangs there and kills the fun of viewing some of the other nice shots.

The black reflective surface shots - good look for you.

> take care

SophieS wrote:
Hi, i'd really love to hear what you think.

> nice


> good capture


Some nice looks - too many in the same settings though.
Best to choose the one that you really dig, then shelf the others till you need a change.

Solid shots #3, 5, 6, 8, 10, 11, 12 (but I do like 5 better), 13, 19, 20


> A very good look for fashion - best of luck to you

Grego Cesco wrote:
sure I'll have a go

> slick


> hey mate!


You have the street/fashion look down. It works for you.
But only a couple with good studio light & color punch - get some more of that, with maybe 1 or 2 more clean fashion pix, in studio again, and this is a really great portfolio

You note on your page that bigger & better is on it's way - let me know if I called it right......

> cheers

Rick Zane wrote:
I am pretty new to photography.. I enjoy taking pictures.. let me know what you think so far..

Hey Rick

You hooked up with some attractive models, but don't rush to post all of the pix at once - kind of overkill. Less is more at first, just keep the strong shots.
And maybe a few too many shots that well....leave not much to the imagination - too much of that can also be overkill.
Go ahead - tease us, it can be fun!

The ones I would keep - #1, 8, 9, 12, 16
Shelf some of the others till you get more up here, or you get bored and want to change something.


> best of luck in Charm City