Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
ok...right now I have 9 people on the list to do...I'm going as fast as I Can.
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Omnipotent M
Posts: 5
Boston, Massachusetts, US
Can we make that 10? Haven't been critiqued in a long time, I think I'm overdue...
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Blushes
Posts: 150
Walnut Creek, California, US
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B Ford
Posts: 82
Nashville, Tennessee, US
Nope...didn't forget you...there's a mehtod to the madness....at any rate...here we go 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: this image...and this entire set is by far the best in your port IMO 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute love that hair....espeically with it has some curl in it 6. Worst Physical attribute thin lips 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. love your look, very fresh face, great hair....learn to express yourself more....try some wild ideas...shoot some iamges that have a theme to them...maybe bright colors, maybe a fairy tale...just something different...also....I Would like to see you in some business atire...pin stripe suit and skirt, black stocking and heels... Thanks for your input I agree I need to change it up some its great to get some new ideas.Thanks for taking the time to critique.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
OdetteDespairr wrote: Hit Me!!! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: chose this one...not because it was the most revealing, but because it said soemthing...had a little story line to it. Very well done. 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute nice breasts for sure 6. Worst Physical attribute Hmm...hard to tell here...but the tushie looks a little soft...in that image with the ropes especially. (Nice image though) 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. Generally like what I See...like that you aren't taking 100 shots of the same basic idea....try to limit the shots to per look (not a hard rule, but a nice one to follow.
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1054663
Posts: 481
London, England, United Kingdom
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
tzeni_kas wrote: please... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: while I dont really like the tonal qualities of this image, I do like your wardrobe and pose...shows off the curves very nicely. pretty face. 4. Worst image ehh...kinda boring...kinda flat, tones are off...Ehhh 5. Best Physical Attribute hips 6. Worst Physical attribute nose seems to have a little hook at the end. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. like what I see....but I have seen your port before and havne't seen much new stuff go up....rotate images out after a while unless they are just killer shots.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Mistress Blushes wrote: me plz very interested 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image: I chose this as your best because it's the one in which you look the most relaxed and the most genuine. 4. Worst image way too "staged" 5. Best Physical Attribute flat abs 6. Worst Physical attribute hair...in some shots it looks really nice and in others it looks over worked....kinda dry and limp 7. Listable? nothing in my currnet lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. do some dramatic shots....get more involved with wardrobe, location and drama...
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Jenn Kendall wrote: You skipped me from page 4? Possibly? ~Jenn~ 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6 3. Best image: really like the rain FX on this one....nice off camera look 4. Worst image wrong angle on this shot, no depth to it....other shots do a better job of showing off your pretty face. 5. Best Physical Attribute very pretty face 6. Worst Physical attribute thin lips 7. Listable? not in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. get involved in more dramaitc shots...put more attention into a detailed wardobe/location...tell a story with your images
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Sarah_Elisabeth
Posts: 278
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Me?...I havent got many professional photos in my port but would still like to know ur opinion with what I got
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Jessyka Ann
Posts: 10660
Hyannis, Massachusetts, US
umm yeah...you skipped me...
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Shaun Tia
Posts: 1697
Phoenix, Arizona, US
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Lisa NJ
Posts: 9
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia
Amazing thread.. would love to hear what you have to say...
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EmeraldSea
Posts: 53
London, England, United Kingdom
pls can I have a go? I just updated my port
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
EmeraldSea wrote: pls can I have a go? I just updated my port 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 3. Best image: I chose this one because of the color contrasts and it seems to be one photo in which part of you came out in yor expression...the other photos seem to be more about the clothes than about you....nothing wrong with that if you want to be a fashion model. 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute love the skin tone 6. Worst Physical attribute nose appears to be a bit wide near the end.... 7. Listable? noting in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. like what I see....but as I said above, the images on here appear to be all about the clothes and not about you....again if you want to be/are a fashion model, then great...f not....then work on getting your own personality into the shots. Also...why the 110 years age thing...makes it hard for people on MM to find you.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Nicole M Berg wrote: How about me? 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: love the iahr and eyes here...very pretty and seductive. 4. Worst image as compared to the other shots in your port this is the worst....not really all that bad in all fairness.just kidna eehhhh...a compared to others. 5. Best Physical Attribute eyes 6. Worst Physical attribute thin lips 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. same as the person above you....all of the images seem to be about the wardrobe or the MU and the photog/client is simply using you as a canvas....there's nothing wrong with that if that is what you do....but something that caught my attention. Also I noticed that most of your images had the same expression in them....just kinda that blank look on th eface.
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Sarah_
Posts: 1487
Los Angeles, California, US
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Shaun Tia wrote: Sadly skipped. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 9 3. Best image: reall like the BW and dramatic look here...well done by all involved. 4. Worst image http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 4e1bf7.jpg 18+ Flattens out the otherwise round and firm tushie... 5. Best Physical Attribute this was a hard one.....such a pretty lady....I am gonna have to go with the tushie....love the tushie...nice and firm! 6. Worst Physical attribute small breasts....in some shots they really look nice and round and in others they do not...don't know if it's the pose, the lighting, the post work or what...but either way it caught my attention. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. I thinik you're stunning...love the over all body and that shot of you wearing the ripped white t-shirt that is wet...wow...hot.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Lisa NJ wrote: Amazing thread.. would love to hear what you have to say... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: 4. Worst image I think most of your images are at the same level as far as quality, so I picked this one as my least fav because of how your face is framed by the hair...the bangs look I didn't care for. 5. Best Physical Attribute lips 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...needs to be tapered a iittle more. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. really like them...would like to see more...step out of the fashion world and do some drama...some shadow play work, somel lifystyle shots.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
SarahElisabeth wrote: Me?...I havent got many professional photos in my port but would still like to know ur opinion with what I got 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: 4. Worst image just a bad shot...mostly technical issues...not pose issues. 5. Best Physical Attribute legs...love those long legs 6. Worst Physical attribute thin lips 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. like what I see so far....relax and shoot as often as you can. Also try to incorporate more location shots and intiricate wardrobes into what you do....let your images tell some sort of story.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Jessyka Ann wrote: umm yeah...you skipped me... 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … b1555b.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image the reason I chose this as the worst really has not much to do with you and more to do with the harsh light fall off and shadow issues. Shadow is good, but it should be subtle 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute tatoos 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. like them...like your bio...it's nice to see someone who legitimately wants to shoot for the art rather than for the $$$.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Sarah_ wrote: I'm curious ^.^ 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7.5 3. Best image: 4. Worst image no depth to the image, the colors are flat, out of focus a wee bit....just not even close to the others in your port. 5. Best Physical Attribute eyes 6. Worst Physical attribute legs....nice and long, but a bit linear...need a bit more taper to them IMO 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. you're a natural...love the images for the most part...the breakfast at tiffanys shot is nice.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Deeniz Villegas wrote: Ill play.. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 3. Best image: 4. Worst image you have lovely hair, and in this shot it disappears into the backdrop...no color depth here at all and no physical depth behind you to show distane. 5. Best Physical Attribute hair 6. Worst Physical attribute nose....seems to be crooked/bumped 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA Model 9 General thoughts on your images. When all you have, ultimately, is a head shot, your facial expression is vital to a good image. A model cannot generally get away with a vacant look on their face. There is a difference between vacant and non focused. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Miss Munroe wrote: skipped ? 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 7 3. Best image: like this image because it shows the shape of the leg and the tushie helps add soem hip in there as well. 4. Worst image bad bad bad...take it down. you are much too pretty to have this shot in your port 5. Best Physical Attribute legs 6. Worst Physical attribute nose...a bit wide 7. Listable? nothing in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. don't fill up the MM page with images just to ake space..that pic of you in the poilice get up is really bad. Shoot as often as you can and relax a little bit. When all you have, ultimately, is a head shot, your facial expression is vital to a good image. A model cannot generally get away with a vacant look on their face. There is a difference between vacant and non focused. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
Model
Mimi Demure
Posts: 5
Leeds, England, United Kingdom
I'd like to know what you think if you're still critiquing. Many thanks in advance.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Kristen_Rayne wrote: me? 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 8 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 3. Best image: 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute hair 6. Worst Physical attribute Hmmmm this was hard to decide...I am going with nose... a bit wide at the base. 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA 9 General thoughts on your images. such a pretty woman...diverse portfolio....one thing I REALLY noticed is that the your hair style really changes your over all look. when it has a little curl in it, it really works....when it's flat straight, not so much....the wet look also suits your nicely. your hair is key!
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Mimi Demure wrote: I'd like to know what you think if you're still critiquing. Many thanks in advance. Mimi Mimi Mimi...you are all woman. 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 9 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 9 3. Best image: 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts...you're breasts are perfection. 6. Worst Physical attribute slightly thin upper lip 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. would LOVE to see you do some real classic pinup...go all out on location, wardrove, lighting, props...do it up right, you alrady have some that are close....but attention to detail is key to getting a nice clasic pin up shot. Also, you are much too beautiful to have shots with bad post work....such a pretty lady!
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
things have slowed down all of a sudden
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Jessyka Ann
Posts: 10660
Hyannis, Massachusetts, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote:
1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … b1555b.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image the reason I chose this as the worst really has not much to do with you and more to do with the harsh light fall off and shadow issues. Shadow is good, but it should be subtle 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute tatoos 7. Listable? yes and have 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA model 9 General thoughts on your images. like them...like your bio...it's nice to see someone who legitimately wants to shoot for the art rather than for the $$$. My tattoos, my scars...everything about my body is what makes me ME.
Photographer
Rebecca Newman Photography
Posts: 1631
Tampa, Florida, US
Joseph Reed Photography wrote: things have slowed down all of a sudden I was skipped on page 2 new years eve!! poo
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B Paige
Posts: 390
Bristol, Virginia, US
I would love your feedback!
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Emily i
Posts: 85
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada
Want to know what you think... I have upgraded my port a bit.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Sloane Victoria wrote: I wanna play! 1. Physical Beauty 1-10: 7.5 2. Sex Appeal 1-10 6.5 3. Best image: http://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 95f21b.jpg 18+ 4. Worst image 5. Best Physical Attribute breasts 6. Worst Physical attribute ass 7. Listable? nothign in my current lists 8. Are you a 'model' or a GWBB/RA GWBB....99% of your images all focus on pure T/A shots....don't misunderstand, there's something to be said for T/A, but mix it up a little bit. 9 General thoughts on your images. Might I suggest the following? Go out and purchase a few magazinesâ¦Redbook, Cosmo, FHM, playboy, doesnât really matter as long as there are women inside displaying a variety of expressions on their face. I would suggest that you try to mimic their expressions until you are comfortable displaying your own. Also, I would suggest you create a list of expressionsâ¦sad, happy, angry, sinful, distraught, envy, greedy, sexy, lustful, etc. Tape it to your bathroom mirror and everyday, take 5 minutes and run through that list watching yourself in the mirror.
Photographer
J D R Photography
Posts: 2261
Vincennes, Indiana, US
Jessyka Ann wrote: My tattoos, my scars...everything about my body is what makes me ME. if that's true, it's kinda sad. Your heart and mind is what should make you who you are.
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