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Model

Marlene Vice

Posts: 85

Porto, Norte, Portugal

Lauren A Farrington wrote:

I don't think it flatters you. The pose is decent, but the expression is mediocre and the light is no good.
The one next to it is better, and I would recommend it as your avatar.

Thank you smile

Feb 01 10 03:47 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Mysterious Nd Exotic wrote:
1 and 2

Best:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100124/06/4b5c5a0d0894b_m.jpg

Avatar:
current

Feb 01 10 03:50 pm Link

Model

Melissa Lytle

Posts: 2

Columbia, South Carolina, US

#2 please. would love to know ur opinion

Feb 01 10 03:51 pm Link

Model

Kate Jenkins

Posts: 31

Yelm, Washington, US

I would love you know #1 and 2 (:

Feb 01 10 04:00 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Melissa Lytle wrote:
#2 please. would love to know ur opinion

Best:
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Worst:
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Feb 01 10 04:15 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Kate Jenkins wrote:
I would love you know #1 and 2 (:

Best:
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Worst:
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Avatar:
current

Feb 01 10 04:16 pm Link

Model

Bekah Jenkins

Posts: 61

Nashville, Arkansas, US

1 and 2 please?

Feb 01 10 04:48 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Bekah Jenkins wrote:
1 and 2 please?

Best:
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100130/19/4b64f53637e59_m.jpg

Worst:
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Avatar:
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Feb 01 10 05:12 pm Link

Model

Kate Baxter

Posts: 121

Houston, Texas, US

Number 2 please! I just put in a couple of new photos and am looking to see what people think. And if I could get an opinion on avatar than would be great. smile

Feb 01 10 06:29 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Kate Baxter wrote:
Number 2 please! I just put in a couple of new photos and am looking to see what people think. And if I could get an opinion on avatar than would be great. smile

Best:
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Worst:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091111/19/4afb7de5f07dd_m.jpg

Avatar:
Current, fo' sho.

Feb 01 10 07:40 pm Link

Model

Dane Halo

Posts: 1154

San Francisco, California, US

Lauren A Farrington wrote:
Best:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

Worst:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

Thank you!

EDIT: 18+ IMAGES IN THE LINKS ABOVE

Feb 01 10 08:10 pm Link

Model

Victoria Shirley

Posts: 208

Cambridge, England, United Kingdom

Lauren A Farrington wrote:

Well, I don't keep up with agency standards, really; but I think 5'7 is a little on the short side. In terms of a look, you've got an interesting one. I don't think you'd get accepted, though, with these in your port:
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091022/01/4ae016adad8a4_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090829/03/4a99073ad3efc_m.jpg
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091206/10/4b1bf5c68ed37_m.jpg

However, your entire first row is fantastic. A bit more experience, and I think you could be ready to give it a try. I know agencies are tough, so you're gonna have to work hard to make them overlook your height.
Best of luck to you. smile

Thank you so much for your honesty smile

Feb 01 10 11:50 pm Link

Model

joanna anderson

Posts: 122

Portsmouth, England, United Kingdom

Hi havn't got a lot of pics but can you do '2' please x

Feb 02 10 02:34 am Link

Model

Aswald

Posts: 3471

Detroit, Michigan, US

1 and 2?

Feb 02 10 02:44 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

joanna anderson wrote:
Hi havn't got a lot of pics but can you do '2' please x

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Feb 02 10 10:33 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Angelica Aswald wrote:
1 and 2?

Best:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … up_id=&ua=

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100123/20/4b5bcd70a8b3f_m.jpg

Avatar:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100202/00/4b67df0b55bca_m.jpg

Feb 02 10 10:35 am Link

Model

Scarlette OShea

Posts: 289

Kansas City, Kansas, US

Let me know! Whichever you want to do!

Feb 02 10 02:18 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Scarlette OShea wrote:
Let me know! Whichever you want to do!

Best:
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Worst:
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Feb 02 10 06:51 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Chaiken

Posts: 1089

Bristol, Connecticut, US

2

Feb 02 10 07:07 pm Link

Model

Emma-Marie

Posts: 129

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

# 3.

And my question is:
The two first pictures (Burlesque) theme are new.. I think they look too overtouched, but I would love to know what you think!

If you could suggest an avatar, that would be awesome too smile

Feb 02 10 07:13 pm Link

Model

Stess

Posts: 80

Brisbane, Queensland, Australia

Hi sounds good, imkeen for whichever one smile thanks!! x

Feb 02 10 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

Steven S Hood

Posts: 142

San Jose, California, US

1 & 2

Feb 02 10 07:15 pm Link

Model

BrookeElese

Posts: 5

Winterville, North Carolina, US

Number 1 and number 2 pretty please?

Feb 02 10 07:15 pm Link

Photographer

Justin Bonaparte

Posts: 265

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

Two to tango.

Feb 02 10 11:23 pm Link

Photographer

Tyler Schultz

Posts: 42

Anaheim, California, US

#2 please

Feb 02 10 11:53 pm Link

Model

JD Noble

Posts: 5

Chandler, Arizona, US

just cant sleep. so have fun. and remember im new to this...

Feb 02 10 11:55 pm Link

Model

Courtney Rapp

Posts: 38

Washington, District of Columbia, US

1 and 2 please?

Feb 03 10 12:33 am Link

Photographer

Photons 2 Pixels Images

Posts: 17011

Berwick, Pennsylvania, US

This one seems popular.

I'll go with #2

Feb 03 10 01:46 am Link

Photographer

HammerPhotography

Posts: 50

Abington, Pennsylvania, US

2 please...

Feb 03 10 02:01 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Mike Chaiken wrote:
2

Best:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/091205/05/4b1a5fa886bdf_m.jpg

Worst:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100101/07/4b3e197749cc0_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 07:12 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Emma-Marie wrote:
# 3.

And my question is:
The two first pictures (Burlesque) theme are new.. I think they look too overtouched, but I would love to know what you think!

If you could suggest an avatar, that would be awesome too smile

I agree; they're too blurred and I don't like the colors of the first one. I think you could probably afford to ditch them.

And for an avatar:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091208/00/4b1e07ec98848_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 07:15 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Stess wrote:
Hi sounds good, imkeen for whichever one smile thanks!! x

Best:
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Worst:
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Feb 03 10 07:16 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Steven S Hood wrote:
1 & 2

Best:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100131/21/4b66681e080dc_m.jpg

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100129/21/4b63c43c8a369_m.jpg

Avatar:
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Feb 03 10 07:19 am Link

Model

Riva_G

Posts: 466

New York, New York, US

#2 please smile

Feb 03 10 07:20 am Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

BrookeElese wrote:
Number 1 and number 2 pretty please?

Best:
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Worst:
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Avatar:
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Feb 03 10 07:20 am Link

Model

amycore

Posts: 419

Los Angeles, California, US

2 please!

Feb 03 10 04:02 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Justin Bonaparte wrote:
Two to tango.

Best:
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Worst:
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Feb 03 10 04:10 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Tyler Schultz wrote:
#2 please

Best:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100103/21/4b4178aa60a16_m.jpg

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080610/23/484f40d9aa98a_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 04:11 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Courtney Rapp wrote:
1 and 2 please?

Best:
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091230/11/4b3bafbe08a8e_m.jpg

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100201/15/4b67620eb60d0_m.jpg

Avatar:
https://modelmayhm-6.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/11/4b253af9a7fd4_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 04:13 pm Link

Photographer

Lauren A Farrington

Posts: 999

Sunderland, Massachusetts, US

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:
This one seems popular.

I'll go with #2

Best:
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090704/17/4a4ff7c23b397_m.jpg

Worst:
https://modelmayhm-1.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100128/10/4b61d60ab6908_m.jpg

Feb 03 10 04:14 pm Link