Model

liindsay ann

Posts: 1861

Cleveland, Ohio, US

be right back, i need food!!

I have lots of time to kill, so I will critique for the next hour or so. 

I'm not going to sugar coat anything!!  smile  I will tell you what needs to go, and I will give you an overall grade of your port.

A- your amazing.
B- your great, but theres something your port could use to make it amazing.
C- so-so, theres room for improvement, but your on the right track.
D- Either your new/need more experience, or your just not getting far.  Keep this as a hobby.
E- Just quit. 

GOOOO!!!!!!!!!

Mar 17 10 03:52 pm Link

Model

deactivatedaccount

Posts: 226

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada

Let me know!

Mar 17 10 03:56 pm Link

Model

B Paige

Posts: 390

Bristol, Virginia, US

me please! smile

Mar 17 10 03:58 pm Link

Model

Sarah_

Posts: 1487

Los Angeles, California, US

Okay. smile

Mar 17 10 04:00 pm Link

Model

liindsay ann

Posts: 1861

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Vladlena Mitskaniouk wrote:
Let me know!

First off, I do not like your avi at all.  very poor quality. 

This:https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100216/11/4b7af346c26eb_m.jpg is not cute.  it's pointless to me.  your eyes look dead.

This:https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100103/20/4b416ce757fe1_m.jpg and this: https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100103/20/4b416bee9fa2e_m.jpg would've been alright if they were shot with a better photographer.  the first one your head is cut off on the top and you look washed out, the second your left arm isn't visible and shouldve been propped up, and once again a bit washed out.

Your candid shot of you in your bikini is very pointless.  it does not give an idea of what you look like.  your face is covered by huge sunglasses.  that belongs on myspace..

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090823/16/4a91d295b585b_m.jpg  poor photography.. the white doesn't look good..


Overall: D  you need to hire a photographer or work some more TF.

Mar 17 10 04:13 pm Link

Photographer

Franko Photo

Posts: 1622

San Jose, California, US

ok - i'm in

Mar 17 10 04:18 pm Link

Model

liindsay ann

Posts: 1861

Cleveland, Ohio, US

B Paige wrote:
me please! smile

Your avi is not showing off your work.. there are way more better choices.  your boobs look very lit up.. 

this is beautiful: https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100223/13/4b8446a5c26f7_m.jpg

This:
https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091101/20/4aee5f71a7cc1_m.jpg
is not flattering.. i can see forehead wrinkles.. i wouldnt even use this.. 

I really don't like this expression:https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100218/16/4b7dd8a5abb59_m.jpg it looks like you have to say something.. you do not look comfortable in this image at all..

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100218/16/4b7dd680ee668_m.jpg this one wouldve been good if you were looking directly at the lens and your expression was more lively..

https://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100103/09/4b40d8b771a3b_m.jpg not a fan.  your also cut off right at your knees.. plus i dont like the neck wrinkles

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15797727 18+ no.  not flattering of your figure..

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16539402 18+ much better image of your figure.. but you need to work more on the expressions!

I didn't go to the rest of the images bc overall I think you need to work a lot on your facial expressions.. there all the same and there not very good..

Grade: C

Mar 17 10 04:26 pm Link

Photographer

Jesse Walker Photo

Posts: 1369

Logan, Utah, US

I'd love a critique... smile

Mar 17 10 04:28 pm Link

Photographer

Gutschi

Posts: 118

Berlin, Berlin, Germany

hi.  i´m in.

Mar 17 10 04:29 pm Link

Model

liindsay ann

Posts: 1861

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Sarah_ wrote:
Okay. smile

you have such a cute, delicate face.. i love it!! i just dont like the choice for your avi..

this needs to be your avi!  gorgeous.. https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091102/18/4aef98a36db5f_m.jpg

I have nothing bad to say about your port.. its gorgeous.. i would just consider choosing a different avi..

Overall grade:  B+

Mar 17 10 04:32 pm Link

Model

Amalie

Posts: 147

..me?

Mar 17 10 04:50 pm Link

Photographer

Saadiq Photography

Posts: 1368

Los Angeles, California, US

Mar 17 10 04:55 pm Link

Photographer

Bill Cumberland

Posts: 140

Houston, Texas, US

I'm game

Mar 17 10 05:59 pm Link

Model

liindsay ann

Posts: 1861

Cleveland, Ohio, US

Anzalone Photography wrote:
ok - i'm in

beautiful avi, wish it showed her elbow though!

Your images are good, but theres nothing that really stands out to me on your port. 

this one:  https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100310/20/4b98749b7954b_m.jpg it doesnt look like she was ready for the photo.. and its not very flattering on her side..

https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090804/13/4a78948ebb07d_m.jpg i do not like the focus with the blurriness on the sides.. this wouldve been better if that photoshop option wasn't used..

i don't like the angle of this shot:  https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/080917/12/48d12d0be2857_m.jpg  in fact i hate that angle on every model.. its very unflattering for the models height.. sometimes it makes them look shorter..


Im not a big fan of the keyhole shot: https://modelmayhm-5.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090611/11/4a3146d37f61e_m.jpg plus there is some cellulite on her thighs..


Overall :  C+

Mar 17 10 06:10 pm Link

Photographer

Mike Chaiken

Posts: 1089

Bristol, Connecticut, US

sure

Mar 17 10 08:02 pm Link

Photographer

Zhiffy Photography

Posts: 1134

Singapore, Singapore, Singapore

let me know (:

Mar 17 10 09:22 pm Link

Model

JANEDOE11

Posts: 1191

Taro Island, Choiseul, Solomon Islands

Sure.

Mar 17 10 09:47 pm Link

Model

Anatomy

Posts: 751

Lackawanna, New York, US

ok sounds fun

Mar 17 10 10:59 pm Link

Model

Caryna

Posts: 24

Lake Havasu City, Arizona, US

if your still going... im in smile

Mar 21 10 04:51 pm Link

Model

Miss Ashley Brooke

Posts: 95

Nashville, Tennessee, US

im game

Mar 21 10 06:16 pm Link

Photographer

Set222

Posts: 8900

Sydney, New South Wales, Australia

me please

Mar 21 10 06:24 pm Link

Model

JANEDOE11

Posts: 1191

Taro Island, Choiseul, Solomon Islands

Moi?

Mar 21 10 07:13 pm Link