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Photographer

Nadirah B

Posts: 28521

Los Angeles, California, US

Thanks!

Aug 05 10 03:47 pm Link

Photographer

DC Photo - Inactive

Posts: 4949

Trenton, New Jersey, US

Eyes look vacant/over-sharpened and the lack of catch-lights makes them look flat.

Just my 2 cents.

Aug 06 10 02:35 am Link

Retoucher

Ashish Arora

Posts: 2068

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Can you put up the before?

Aug 06 10 02:39 am Link

Retoucher

Michael Brittain

Posts: 2214

Wahiawa, Hawaii, US

Needs more work on the neck and chin.

Aug 06 10 05:44 am Link

Photographer

Nadirah B

Posts: 28521

Los Angeles, California, US

big_smile

Aug 06 10 02:19 pm Link

Photographer

Nadirah B

Posts: 28521

Los Angeles, California, US

btdsgn wrote:
Needs more work on the neck and chin.

I can see it now it isn't super late at night!

Aug 06 10 02:20 pm Link

Photographer

toan thai photography

Posts: 697

Montgomery Village, Maryland, US

she has bad hair day. i see repeated section of hair. do you have other images that you could use to add volume to her hair. her left eye socket could use some dimension--it looks a bit flat

Aug 06 10 04:16 pm Link

Photographer

Nadirah B

Posts: 28521

Los Angeles, California, US

toan thai photography wrote:
she has bad hair day. i see repeated section of hair. do you have other images that you could use to add volume to her hair. her left eye socket could use some dimension--it looks a bit flat

I was looking for hair shots...buttttt you know!

dodge and burn the eye?

Aug 06 10 05:24 pm Link

Photographer

toan thai photography

Posts: 697

Montgomery Village, Maryland, US

Nadirah B wrote:

I was looking for hair shots...buttttt you know!

dodge and burn the eye?

not her eye. it's the socket. i see there is more depth on her right eye socket. you could d&b a little to add more depth. i could be wrong--my laptop is not calibrated smile

Aug 06 10 05:37 pm Link