EmeraldSea wrote:
i'll have a go. You can also tell me which one photo in the group images are good/bad

WOW I am LOVING the movement in the top half of your portfolio! I would love to see some more added in 2010.  I feel that the bottom half of your portfolio is weaker than the top half...by quite a bit.

This is my fav, soo elegant and soo graceful..beautiful!
I think this is the weakest in your portfolio.

It is flat and uninteresting.
Will be looking at your portfolio again!

Ronnie O wrote:
hit me

Another strong port and for one so young I look forward to seeing what you come up with in 2010.
This is the strongest in your portfolio, love the movement and your expression.

Although I also love:

This is the weakest in your portfolio:

I really dont like your hand in this and am instantly drawn to it instead or to you.
Would really like to see some more beauty images in your portfolio and some more work on location.

Plus Model Sumer wrote:
Alrighty

You are beautiful!
I adore this image in your portfolio, different and VERY eyecatching.

This really has to go, not flattering at all, there are however a few others that I would delete from your portfolio, sometimes less is def more

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:

Another strong port and for one so young I look forward to seeing what you come up with in 2010.
This is the strongest in your portfolio, love the movement and your expression.

Although I also love:

This is the weakest in your portfolio:
I really dont like your hand in this and am instantly drawn to it instead or to you.
Would really like to see some more beauty images in your portfolio and some more work on location.

Thank You!!!

MVK Photography wrote:
me please!

Hi there
This is the strongest image in your portfolio,

It was a tough choice between this one and the first one in your portfolio.
AAARRRGGGHHH selective colouring! This one is the weakest in your portfolio.
I would love to see some more beauty from you and def more like numbers 1 and 2, those are great
All the best in 2010!

wbphotography wrote:
ok. have a go

ooohhh I like your portfolio, very nice work!
This is my fav in your port, I love the intensity from the model, the crop and the lighting. It was however a very difficult choice.

I am not feeling your location work at all, this is the weakest in your portfolio:

I would love to see some really strong location stuff from you. I feel its the one area of your portfolio that is letting you down.
All the best for 2010!

Leah Jung wrote:
hello! thanks for taking time to help us...

Hi there
I feel this whole set are the best in your portfolio, they are fun and made me smile!

Ok I really feel that you need to trim quite a bit from your portfolio.  The above images show how you can really model and there are a lot of photographs in there that don't do this. We need to see more of you like those.
I dont get this at all, we can see you, you look unconfortable.

I think with the right photographers in 2010 you could really push your port.  Have a look at The List and see if you can get someone there to shoot
Good Luck in 2010!

Eric Simard wrote:
me please.

On now you have a lot of really nice work!
This is my fav in your portfolio, the model is beautiful, the tones and lighting are just fantastic.

Then however we also have this in your portfolio which does not belong there.

I really like the majority of your portfolio but there are a few images that should not be there.
All the best for 2010

Ronnie O wrote:

Thank You!!!

Your welcome

GDE Photography wrote:
Tear me down then build me up...

Hi there
I have had a look through your portfolio and feel that there are a few issues. You need to compose your photographs a lot differently, almost every image has the model central in the image with a lot of dead space to either end.
You also need to choose your locations a lot more carefully they are either really busy of really bare.
This however is great, I wanna see more of this in 2010!!
http://modelmayhm-8.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … 1e4ee0.jpg
I think there is a lot in your portfolio that should be deleted but this one has to go first.

The background is really cluttered, you chopped off her fingers and the model is not really working in the shot.
All the best for 2010!

AlphaPhotoandvideo wrote:
mine please

also let me know if need to change my avatar

thanks

Hi there
Ok i am a little confused by your portfolio, You have a couple of great images and you have a few that you could lose.
Work on your lighting and crops in your images.
This is my fav in your portfolio, without any doubt :
http://modelmayhm-4.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … b84d24.jpg
I also like

but feel that the composition lets it down
Delete this one. The angle is really unflattering, the left arm looks really big:

All the best in 2010!

L Su wrote:
sounds like fun!

Hi there
You are BEAUTIFUL!
I would love to see you do some beauty images, I think you would look devine
This is the weakest image in your portfolio, we dont see enough of you.

This is the strongest in your portfolio, pose works well and i LOVE that expression:

All the best in 2010!

Nicole M Berg wrote:
How about me?

Hi there
You are stunning and the majority of your portfolio rocks!!
I am soo loving this image (listed!!)

The weakest in your portfolio is weak due to a) selective colouring and b) the crop, you however rocked the look. I soo hope you have more from this shoot.

Really looking forward to seeing what you do this year!
All the best for 2010!

Sharlie Scandal wrote:
Oh I need this, can I have a turn please?

Hi there
I love your look, I would love to see some more colourful sets done with you!
This is my fav in your port, you look fantastic, although i also liked the attitude in the one next to it and the pose and expression in the one at the start of the row also rock.

This one and the one next to it really need to go, they are not  near as strong as your other work!

All the best for 2010!

Eclectic Vision  wrote:
Please

Hi there
I have been in your portfolio quite a few times, I really admire your work!
This is my fav in your portfolio, although there are quite a few that I love just as much:

This is my least fav in your port, it seems really tame compared to the rest of your work:
http://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/pho … b8c00e.jpg
All the best for 2010!

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:

Hi there
I love your look, I would love to see some more colourful sets done with you!
This is my fav in your port, you look fantastic, although i also liked the attitude in the one next to it and the pose and expression in the one at the start of the row also rock.

This one and the one next to it really need to go, they are not  near as strong as your other work!

All the best for 2010!

Thank you I wasn't sure about those two either.

DonnaToni wrote:
please?

Hi there!
You portfolio needs quite a bit of work, you need to get shooting
This is my fav in your portfolio, the pose is nice although I am not a fan of the facial expression.

This is my least fav in your portfolio.

Have a look at The List and get shooting
All the best for 2010!

Matt Carmody wrote:
would love to know what you think

Hi there
You have a FANTASTIC look, I really want to see you shoot more in 2010!
This is the strongest in your portfolio, great look and very strong headshot!

This is the weakest in your portfolio, the expression is great but the image is not:

All the best for 2010!

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:

Hi there
You have a FANTASTIC look, I really want to see you shoot more in 2010!
This is the strongest in your portfolio, great look and very strong headshot!

This is the weakest in your portfolio, the expression is great but the image is not:

All the best for 2010!

Thank you so much for the encouragement!! Should I let you know when I get new pics?? haha