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Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Post 1 Image

MUST NOT be a headshot, give me something to work with

I will write a Haiku about the image


All critiques/poems (c) 2010 Niall Mitchell. All rights reserved except that permission is hereby given to the original poster who may use the critique/poem in conjunction with the image critiqued, as long as the statement "Text (c) 2010 Niall Mitchell" accompanies the image.

Jan 12 10 11:40 pm Link

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Merry

Posts: 1678

London, England, United Kingdom

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Go for it, sounds fun! big_smile

Jan 13 10 03:35 am Link

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Sungoddess Studios

Posts: 5191

Keyport, New Jersey, US

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A haiku from you,whatever shall I do? smile

Jan 13 10 03:40 am Link

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Jennifer Barker

Posts: 8010

Houston, Arkansas, US

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Jan 13 10 03:51 am Link

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Kidtee Hello

Posts: 476

Nashville, Tennessee, US

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YAY!

Jan 13 10 05:46 am Link

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depakote

Posts: 327

Naugatuck, Connecticut, US

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Jan 13 10 05:49 am Link

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MissSybarite

Posts: 11863

Los Angeles, California, US

If you want... and I write haiku and senryu too wink

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Jan 13 10 05:53 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Merry P wrote:
https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091129/07/4b1298415c38d_m.jpg
Go for it, sounds fun! big_smile

fall's chill turns leaves red
startled fear caught: eyes of a
lost child, photographed

Jan 13 10 05:58 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Sungoddess Studios wrote:
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A haiku from you,whatever shall I do? smile

after victory,
opponent bleeding somewhere,
lone duellist's regret

Jan 13 10 06:00 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Jennifer Barker wrote:
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no different today,
love's play gone awry, either
spurned or spurning: stalks

Jan 13 10 06:06 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Kidtee Hello wrote:
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YAY!

what comfort from arm's
embrace for the flowers plucked:
their brief life over?

Jan 13 10 06:09 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

eric ely wrote:
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beneath the humor
a complete summation: who
fears Freudian slip?

Jan 13 10 06:11 am Link

Photographer

Light Writer

Posts: 18391

Phoenix, Arizona, US

Miss Anthrope 1007 wrote:
If you want... and I write haiku and senryu too wink

https://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091225/13/4b352fef92e77.jpg

what weight compresses
a spirit, once free? small move
and release is sure.

Jan 13 10 06:14 am Link

Photographer

depakote

Posts: 327

Naugatuck, Connecticut, US

Niall Photo wrote:

beneath the humor
a complete summation: who
fears Freudian slip?

Awesome

Jan 13 10 06:14 am Link

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MissSybarite

Posts: 11863

Los Angeles, California, US

Niall Photo wrote:

what weight compresses
a spirit, once free? small move
and release is sure.

perfectly fitting wink

Jan 13 10 06:21 am Link