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Photographer

svc photography

Posts: 1107

Medford, Massachusetts, US

on my favorite photo in your port.

Will be on and off all day so don't get all pissy if I don't get to you right away!


(You may do the same to my port if you wish)

EDIT: comments will be left ON the photo IN your port.

Jan 13 10 06:31 am Link

Model

TILL H S

Posts: 1700

London, England, United Kingdom

svc photography wrote:
on my favorite photo in your port.

Will be on and off all day so don't get all pissy if I don't get to you right away!


(You may do the same to my port if you wish)

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091212/06/4b23a53449284.jpg

while i like this, i think more could have been done w/ her hair- it's just kind of there...

Jan 13 10 06:49 am Link

Photographer

RDH Photography

Posts: 93

Edison, Ohio, US

I'm game i could use all the Improvement Input i can get. I have a couple more shoots scheduled for this weekend and being new to this would like to know what I can do to get better.

Jan 13 10 07:30 am Link

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Hell kat

Posts: 1005

Warrington, England, United Kingdom

me?

Jan 13 10 08:12 am Link

Photographer

Studio506

Posts: 76

Loganville, Georgia, US

do me

Jan 13 10 10:31 am Link

Photographer

svc photography

Posts: 1107

Medford, Massachusetts, US

next!

Jan 13 10 12:39 pm Link

Model

Summer Carrier

Posts: 1

Carrollton, Georgia, US

Do me smile

Jan 13 10 12:43 pm Link

Model

Emily Marissa

Posts: 21

San Francisco, California, US

me too!  smile

Jan 13 10 12:47 pm Link

Photographer

svc photography

Posts: 1107

Medford, Massachusetts, US

Emily Marissa wrote:
me too!  smile

Done... you need some non-bikini shots in your port! You have a great look but could definitely use some diversity.

Jan 13 10 01:05 pm Link

Photographer

First Kiss

Posts: 1015

San Diego, California, US

i'd appreciate your thoughts

Jan 13 10 01:07 pm Link

Photographer

Ed Stringbourne

Posts: 16319

Kansas City, Missouri, US

All yours Sofi, I haven't had a comment in aaaaaaaaaages big_smile

Jan 13 10 05:05 pm Link

Photographer

L A F

Posts: 8524

Davenport, Iowa, US

Yes please

Jan 13 10 05:08 pm Link

Model

Amanda X3

Posts: 84

Dallas, Texas, US

Me please ^_^

Jan 13 10 05:12 pm Link

Photographer

The Photo Chase

Posts: 36

Baltimore, Maryland, US

If you would be so kind....

Jan 13 10 11:44 pm Link

Photographer

svc photography

Posts: 1107

Medford, Massachusetts, US

Ed Stringbourne wrote:
All yours Sofi, I haven't had a comment in aaaaaaaaaages big_smile

What's it been, all of 5 minutes? wink

Anyways, jsyk, it took me a good 20 minutes to pic the photo I did to comment on.

Jan 14 10 06:27 am Link

Model

Ania N

Posts: 358

please

Jan 14 10 06:30 am Link

Model

DarcieK

Posts: 10876

Regina, Saskatchewan, Canada

Me please.

Jan 14 10 01:34 pm Link

Photographer

Keys88 Photo

Posts: 17646

New York, New York, US

You don't come to my portfolio often enough sad

*(You're also not IN my portfolio!!)  sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Jan 14 10 03:55 pm Link

Photographer

svc photography

Posts: 1107

Medford, Massachusetts, US

Stephen Markman wrote:
You don't come to my portfolio often enough sad

*(You're also not IN my portfolio!!)  sad sad sad sad sad sad sad sad

Come spring that will be changing... will PM you about it... but first.. off to your port!

Jan 16 10 06:48 am Link

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Jade Brennan

Posts: 143

East Grinstead, England, United Kingdom

oo me...

Jan 16 10 03:37 pm Link

Photographer

DC Photo - Inactive

Posts: 4949

Trenton, New Jersey, US

Me too, please.

Jan 16 10 09:19 pm Link

Model

TrackBelle

Posts: 4497

San Francisco, California, US

I'm getting in line

Jan 16 10 09:56 pm Link

Photographer

A mirror darkly

Posts: 155

Portland, Oregon, US

When you get a moment...

Jan 21 10 12:46 am Link

Photographer

FotoMark

Posts: 2978

Oxnard, California, US

svc photography wrote:
on my favorite photo in your port.

Will be on and off all day so don't get all pissy if I don't get to you right away!


(You may do the same to my port if you wish)

EDIT: comments will be left ON the photo IN your port.

Interested and patient wink

Jan 21 10 12:52 am Link

Photographer

Migtek

Posts: 369

Burbank, California, US

Till HS already commented on what is my favorite pic in your profile. I love the shot, btw. Anyway, since my favorite has already been addressed, I will comment on this one.

https://modelmayhm-2.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100101/15/4b3e7f97da46d_m.jpg

I like the composition, and really like the photo, but think it would even be better with the other hand and feet included in the shot. Or, if you were wanting to focus on her anchor, I would have zoomed-in or possibly cropped differently.  With that said, I like your shooting style and the compositions of your work.

Jan 21 10 05:45 am Link

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Plus Model Sumer Noelle

Posts: 682

Santa Cruz, California, US

Ok big_smile

Jan 21 10 08:24 am Link

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J_A_Y_C_E_E

Posts: 116

Eugene, Oregon, US

Would love some constructive feedback smile

Jan 21 10 08:29 am Link

Photographer

Eclectic Vision

Posts: 8281

Toledo, Ohio, US

Please

Jan 21 10 08:31 am Link

Photographer

M co

Posts: 461

Lakewood, Washington, US

any advice is much welcome.

Jan 21 10 10:41 am Link

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Kaia

Posts: 1563

Dallas, Texas, US

yes please!

Jan 21 10 11:15 am Link

Photographer

Franko Photo

Posts: 1622

San Jose, California, US

me please?

Jan 21 10 11:18 am Link

Photographer

Kevin Greggain Photography

Posts: 6769

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada

How about mine ?

Jan 21 10 11:44 am Link

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Lloyd Wootten

Posts: 48

Chico, California, US

construct away.

Jan 21 10 04:21 pm Link

Photographer

Rebecca Newman Photography

Posts: 1631

Tampa, Florida, US

svc photography wrote:
on my favorite photo in your port.

Will be on and off all day so don't get all pissy if I don't get to you right away!


(You may do the same to my port if you wish)

EDIT: comments will be left ON the photo IN your port.

I'll take on...and give one!

Jan 21 10 07:23 pm Link

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Sarah M Model

Posts: 290

Preston, England, United Kingdom

me please:)

Jan 23 10 04:17 pm Link