Laura Ann Experimental wrote:
Yes please

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Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:
Old Uncle Jeb is back for a visit and brought some of his home-made hooch. He's more than half in the bag and wants to let you know what he thinks of your images.

Post an image (link 18+) and Jeb will tell you what he thinks.

This is meant for fun, but if you read carefully, you may actually get some value from his critique.

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:

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Sorry, didn't see the post an image part.

My avatar.  I'll be back with the picture link.

Sarah Jean C wrote:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pid=15927336&group_id=&ua=  (18+)

give it a go.

OOOOO. Dem dere are some right fine pichurs. I need ta find me sum curtins like dat fer my winders. 'Cept the 'ol lady might pitch a fit or two 'bout dat.

Yew gots sum mighty fine curves dare young lady. And how you standin' like dat remind me of sum of dem dare arty things like day show in dem dare museems. I also likes how yew make sum shapes wit yer posin' an all. Triangles, rectangles...yew did dem real good.

I really like da look on yer face in da first pichur. The third not so much. It almost looks like yer sleepin' dare. Or like yew are bein' bored and agitated at da same time. In da fifth (dat reminds me, I need another jug o' hooch), yer face is purty and sayreen-like.

I like dem pichurs. Good job.

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:

OOOOO. Dem dere are some right fine pichurs. I need ta find me sum curtins like dat fer my winders. 'Cept the 'ol lady might pitch a fit or two 'bout dat.

Yew gots sum mighty fine curves dare young lady. And how you standin' like dat remind me of sum of dem dare arty things like day show in dem dare museems. I also likes how yew make sum shapes wit yer posin' an all. Triangles, rectangles...yew did dem real good.

I really like da look on yer face in da first pichur. The third not so much. It almost looks like yer sleepin' dare. Or like yew are bein' bored and agitated at da same time. In da fifth (dat reminds me, I need another jug o' hooch), yer face is purty and sayreen-like.

I like dem pichurs. Good job.

best critique eavaaaaarrrrr!

thanks.

Kindra Marie wrote:


as far a i know this doesn't need to be blue linked let me know if it does

Hi, Kindra. How ya been?

Oh, ya. I tink yew showed me dis pichur da last time I was here alookin'. Dis one tells me a story. A story of faith, love, war, loss, anguish, and redemption. Wit dat paintin' on yew jus' as such, it reminds me dat mother earth plays many roles in our lives. Protector, nurturer, punisher.

I like dis pichur. I see sumptin' new evry time I takes a look at it. Yew do good job on yer posin' too. I like dem dare angles and curves. Triangles make nice shapes fer da eyes to look at. An' esses are jus' purty no matter how yew look at 'em.

Laura Ann Experimental wrote:

Sorry, didn't see the post an image part.

My avatar.  I'll be back with the picture link.

Hi Laura. I see you're branching out. I like it! Nice work in this port.

Dis here pichur is mighty purty. Da way yew captured her eyes is mezmerizin' me. Da look on her face is purfect, too. I'm not too crazy 'bout dat little piece o' her arm up dare by her head. It makes me keep lookin' dare to see what dat's all 'bout. I don't wanna look dare. I wanna look at her eyes. Dat little drop o' vinegarette is nice, too. Is dat what dat's called? When yew make da edges around da pichur darker or lighter. Vignette. Yea, dat's it. Vignette. Jus' a lil' bit on da bottom, but looks good to me.

Yew got dat focus jus' right. Da color looks good too. She looks like a natural beauty. Like someone I could 'spect to see on da street.

Yeah, dat's a good one allright. Yew done good here.

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:

Hi, Kindra. How ya been?

Oh, ya. I tink yew showed me dis pichur da last time I was here alookin'. Dis one tells me a story. A story of faith, love, war, loss, anguish, and redemption. Wit dat paintin' on yew jus' as such, it reminds me dat mother earth plays many roles in our lives. Protector, nurturer, punisher.

I like dis pichur. I see sumptin' new evry time I takes a look at it. Yew do good job on yer posin' too. I like dem dare angles and curves. Triangles make nice shapes fer da eyes to look at. An' esses are jus' purty no matter how yew look at 'em.

Thank you I love your stories

Annie RS wrote:
my avatar please?

OOOO I tell ya, dat dare floor ain't no place ta be passin' out, no ma'am. Dem dare dogs musta mistook me for a tree or sumptin'.


Anyways, I like dis here pichur. Yew gots such a nice, purty look on yer face. Almos' like yew lookin' back at summun dat yew loves. Or thinkin' 'bout summun dat yew loves. Dat makes me smile real big. And dat light bouncin' offa yer eye is right nice, it shore is. I also likes dat outfit dat yer wearin'. It goes right nice wit yer hair.

Only 2 little things I ain't so happy wit here. Dat one little frilly thing on yer top comin' up across yer neck don't seem like it belongs dare. And dat little group o' hair on da other side o' yer face it don't look quite right dare like dat. They's not so bad, though.

Yep. I like dis pichur. You done good.

Annie RS wrote:
or this one maybe!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/pic.php?pic … =95589&ua=

OOOOO. Dis ere pichur looks real good. It slaps me in da face with all sorts of 'motions. Dat look on yer face makes me wonder if yew plannin' on lurin' me in close den gonna kick me in da baws so's yew ken 'scape. Yer a tricky one, ain'tcha? Sly and devious like dat dare fox kept gettin' into my henhouse. I like, too, how yer hair flows around yew like dat. Dat's right purty, it is. I jus' wish dare was more light in dem purty eyes of yore's.

Dis good pichur.

Ania N wrote:
http://modelmayhm-7.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100113/06/4b4ddbb7c37f0.jpg

OOOOOO. Dat's nice. You shore are a sleepin' beauty, ain'tcha? I like dat hair you have dare. Dat's neat and all. Only thing I don't get is the change in outfit in the last pichur. I like dis idee you done here. An' da look on yer face is perfect for dis. I like dis a lot.

Good job. I like dis pichur.

Photons 2 Pixels Images wrote:

OOOOO. Dis ere pichur looks real good. It slaps me in da face with all sorts of 'motions. Dat look on yer face makes me wonder if yew plannin' on lurin' me in close den gonna kick me in da baws so's yew ken 'scape. Yer a tricky one, ain'tcha? Sly and devious like dat dare fox kept gettin' into my henhouse. I like, too, how yer hair flows around yew like dat. Dat's right purty, it is. I jus' wish dare was more light in dem purty eyes of yore's.

Dis good pichur.

THANKS!