My Playground wrote:
Also, did I do well in my editing? What would you do differently? What would you change? What should I re-edit?

I double checked off the original I have, and yet to start at some stage, but I cant get past the top of her head. :-( the hair....it just, to me it distracts from the whole image....yeah ok so you need to look at masking hair and how to use what ya have (I'm no expert and still learning and all i've done this week is hair retouches to get practice)  Theres several threads on it here already. Take sections, mask back in using smart objects so you dont lose any details in sizing the "pieces". Your basically wig making only digitally.

Peano wrote:
I also found the top of the head a bit distracting. It appears to have been masked too cleanly. One easy fix for that: On a blank layer, use the clone tool to pull a few flyaway hairs out of the hard edge. With her hairstyle, flyaways are fine. Here's an illustration, but you might choose to make it more or less "messy."

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Here's a link to a small set of smudge brushes. I used the hair brush in this case ... sized very small, 90% or more strength, normal mode.

Thank you. This helped alot

Peano wrote:
I also found the top of the head a bit distracting. It appears to have been masked too cleanly. One easy fix for that: On a blank layer, use the clone* tool to pull a few flyaway hairs out of the hard edge. With her hairstyle, flyaways are fine. Here's an illustration, but you might choose to make it more or less "messy."

*CORRECTION: use the smudge tool 

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Here's a link to a small set of smudge brushes. I used the hair brush in this case ... sized very small, 90% or more strength, normal mode.

This.