TrackBelle wrote:
thoughts on me?

I probably have to NOT talk about your lips for paragraphs again this time... LOL
You have such a beautiful face! I have a weakness for Asian girls, they're just the best!!
I hope you pursue teen/junior catalog. You'd be just perfect for that market.

Natalie Swift wrote:
oh ME

Hi Natalie,
Hope you're having a healthy pregnancy and that you bounce back from the birth swiftly and jump back into shooting. I think you have a lot to offer such a beautiful state that needs girls to shoot at the waters!
Moisturize that belly!

Jay Suder-JSFOTO wrote:
OK!!!!

All you repeats! I have had you in a critique before.. think I said
bleh to the body paint, and bleh to three boobs, But maybe I'm boring!! LOL
good glam bud!!

Jessica Fan wrote:
hey! i just had my first photoshoot ever last week and they're posted!! what do you think?

Hey Jess!
Aww yeah, more asians to gaze upon!


This is my fave shot from your first shoot. Awesome work for your first shoot. Best wishes, and remember, especially for being so young, be safe about who you shoot with and the terms of shoots.
I am happy to be your first post in the forums as well!
xo

RMT Photography wrote:
yes please

I like this shot:

For a more in focus shot, speed up the shutter speed or explore your sports settings to lock in and get the shot.
I like the commercial stuff you do.

Lisa Levin wrote:
Jessica, you're amazing! What can I do to be awesome like you?

I appreciate your honesty

Cheer for me!...three asians on the first page
Lisa, you're so full of awesome sauce on your own but I'll trow something your way.

This shot is so cool but the wrinkled bed sheets take away from it. I know this is no fault of your own and nothing you an do to fix. As you grow in your shooting you will know people you've grown beyond who do this sort of a set up. Seamless paper is a standard for studio work and if he can't give you that then you should find willing parties who will... and you WILL!
Love the motion shot and that you're doing more than just standing in your shot!!

MVK Photography wrote:
me please!

Hi Molly,
Congrats for shooting at such a young age. You have so much time and opportunity to grow.

This shot has the right spirit but I'm not sure the shots were the best choices of the series. The bottom shot, she looks rather pensive and overall unphotogenic. Maybe I'm missing the editorial aspect of what you were trying to express here, but chances are if I did, many viewers are also.
Try selective liquify in PS to feminize her jaw. Most models have features you want to play down and that is hers.

H B P wrote:
I want to know what you think. If you would be so kind.

Amusing self portrait!! LOL

A quick fleeting thought on your bio...Pairing raunchy and fetish could be seen as insulting to some. We get its not your thing but always remember how active a community the fetish/bondage members are on MM and that you may offend without meaning to. You shoot nudes and do you cringe when some model says in her profile "...she doesn't pose nude or anything raunchy like that..."?? To each their own.
Just something to think about.
I bet in your town you have a prime pick of lovely ladies in such a high trafficked area!!

Leo Edwards wrote:
Let delve into your mind them J

Rgds


L

Hi Leo!

Even though you shoot nudes I sense you are face focused. Be a great headshot shooter and you'll never go out of style. Right now you're all over the place, but, narrow down what you feel works for you and what you lean towards most, nail it several times, then see how to vary it from there!

FootNote Fotography wrote:
Go for it.

Military?
Come home

I gather your use of negative space for your studio work is intentional so this is just an idea... I think you'd have stronger shots doing tighter crops on the same shots and taking them to vertical format.

Tyrone Lavigne wrote:
What do you think?

Like your work! My only critique is not being too fond of low contrast. I think people use it for sort of a flare look or vintage tone, but, just not my preference. That is all it is though, a preference.

Jessica Vaugn  wrote:

Amusing self portrait!! LOL

A quick fleeting thought on your bio...Pairing raunchy and fetish could be seen as insulting to some. We get its not your thing but always remember how active a community the fetish/bondage members are on MM and that you may offend without meaning to. You shoot nudes and do you cringe when some model says in her profile "...she doesn't pose nude or anything raunchy like that..."?? To each their own.
Just something to think about.
I bet in your town you have a prime pick of lovely ladies in such a high trafficked area!!

You're absolutely right. It is a fairly large community especially in the town I live in. Thanks, I really Appreciate your thoughts.

Have a wonderful night.