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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Lets play! FUN AND GAMES haha Tell me my worst photo, and in return, I'll tell you what yours is in my opinion!
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Brandon Lundby
Posts: 177
Las Vegas, Nevada, US
I love all of your photos! but if I had to choose it would be this one: just because its very dark and the focus seems to be more on the bright shop to the right rather than you
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KEKnight
Posts: 1876
Cumming, Georgia, US
Have at it .... should be easy!!! Edit: I hate trolls!!!!
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Brandon Lundby wrote: I love all of your photos! but if I had to choose it would be this one: just because its very dark and the focus seems to be more on the bright shop to the right rather than you
Your 3rd, or your last. There's no FIRE or focus in your eyes on those!
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
KEKnight wrote: Have at it .... should be easy!!! Edit: I hate trolls!!!! Your 5th. It just doesnt speak to me the way the others do. I think you have muchhh better shots in your portfolio!
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m3g0ra
Posts: 467
Dublin, Dublin, Ireland
I think there is something about your mouth in this image I don't really like, too much tension perhaps? But otherwise gorgeous port.
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Omen_Intendu wrote: I think there is something about your mouth in this image I don't really like, too much tension perhaps? But otherwise gorgeous port.
Your 1st shot. I just dont... LOVE it! If you wanted to put a few snap shots in there, I think its best to take your camera out EVERY day (i know it sounds self centered), and practice your angles and expressions and try it in different parts of your house for different light but I think you'd be able to better show yourself in a different photo.
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Demetra D
Posts: 1133
New York, New York, US
Great port! I found a lot of beautiful pictures! This one didn't impress me though: You just look a little bored..
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Vanisa Dimitrova wrote: Great port! I found a lot of beautiful pictures! This one didn't impress me though: You just look a little bored.. You are absolutely gorgeous, but your 13th photo makes you look chunky. And by looking at the rest... You arent chunky!!!
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Damianne
Posts: 15978
Austin, Texas, US
You have a lot of very stylized, conceptual shots, and then this sitting around:
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DC Photo - Inactive
Posts: 4949
Trenton, New Jersey, US
Have to agree with the other comments, the focus just doesn't seem to be on you which it should be.
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Damianne wrote: You have a lot of very stylized, conceptual shots, and then this sitting around: Your 6th looks too snapshot ish
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
David Cajio Photography wrote: Have to agree with the other comments, the focus just doesn't seem to be on you which it should be. Your 8th. You have soooo much better in your portfolio!
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Sungoddess Studios
Posts: 5191
Keyport, New Jersey, US
Game, help me too. I was never a fan of head cropping but this one is very well executed. the other head crop shots aren't not very good maybe if you have other shots from those shoots. this is the best, should be your avatar.
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Red Rhapsody
Posts: 551
Toms River, New Jersey, US
This is my least favorite. Your facial expression just isn't working for me. I think it's what you're doing with your lips. They are very tense looking.
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CMartinPhotography
Posts: 2127
Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom
your not in focus
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Sungoddess Studios wrote: Game, help me too. I was never a fan of head cropping but this one is very well executed. the other head crop shots aren't not very good maybe if you have other shots from those shoots. this is the best, should be your avatar. Love your 8th, and 16th. Not a huge fan of #11 though.
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Red Rhapsody wrote: This is my least favorite. Your facial expression just isn't working for me. I think it's what you're doing with your lips. They are very tense looking. Your porfolio is WONDERFUL, very stunning. I least like your 3rd. I dont like the lack of focus with your eyes!
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote: your not in focus 10th. I know the look and style is to be blown out, but you live in a BEAUTIFUL scenic area. Would have loved it with some background.
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Sarah Parmeter
Posts: 97
Mountain View, Hawaii, US
I don't know what everyone is talking about but I love the that photo of you on the street. It may not be the most technical photo but it has more of a personality. ITs your 5th photo that doesn't do anything for me.
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M co
Posts: 461
Lakewood, Washington, US
really its the fashion & unnatural poses.... but my fiance doesnt even think i have any sense in fashion so, don't take me for the truth.
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Victoria Shaughnessy
Posts: 508
Arvada, Colorado, US
Sarah Kanzler wrote: I don't know what everyone is talking about but I love the that photo of you on the street. It may not be the most technical photo but it has more of a personality. ITs your 5th photo that doesn't do anything for me. Your 4th. The girl in the front is making a funny face, and looks really really short and oddly shaped in that shot.
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M co
Posts: 461
Lakewood, Washington, US
Victoria Shaughnessy wrote: bump?? skipped?
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chesty
Posts: 1978
Burbank, California, US
This is my least favorite. It's not a bad picture, but I don't think the look is as flattering to you. Maybe it's the dress or the straight legged pose. Regarding the picture with the cigarette in the alley, and the picture of you in your sweater, sitting off to the left side, I think both images would be improved, if they were cropped closer, putting the focus back on you. Personally, I like both of those shots. Please pick one from my unassigned album...
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