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Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Lets play!
FUN AND GAMES smile haha

Tell me my worst photo, and in return, I'll tell you what yours is in my opinion!

Jan 17 10 06:24 pm Link

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Brandon Lundby

Posts: 177

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

I love all of your photos!
but if I had to choose it would be this one:
just because its very dark and the focus seems to be more on the bright shop to the right rather than you
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f.jpg

Jan 17 10 06:35 pm Link

Photographer

KEKnight

Posts: 1876

Cumming, Georgia, US

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f_m.jpg
Have at it .... should be easy!!!  hmm

Edit:  I hate trolls!!!!

Jan 17 10 06:39 pm Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Brandon Lundby wrote:
I love all of your photos!
but if I had to choose it would be this one:
just because its very dark and the focus seems to be more on the bright shop to the right rather than you
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f.jpg

Your 3rd, or your last.
There's no FIRE or focus in your eyes on those!

Jan 17 10 07:36 pm Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

KEKnight wrote:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f_m.jpg
Have at it .... should be easy!!!  hmm

Edit:  I hate trolls!!!!

Your 5th.
It just doesnt speak to me the way the others do. I think you have muchhh better shots in your portfolio!

Jan 17 10 07:37 pm Link

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m3g0ra

Posts: 467

Dublin, Dublin, Ireland

I think there is something about your mouth in this image I don't really like, too much tension perhaps? But otherwise gorgeous port.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090118/20/4974023f568ca_m.jpg

Jan 17 10 07:40 pm Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Omen_Intendu wrote:
I think there is something about your mouth in this image I don't really like, too much tension perhaps? But otherwise gorgeous port.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090118/20/4974023f568ca_m.jpg

Your 1st shot. I just dont... LOVE it! If you wanted to put a few snap shots in there, I think its best to take your camera out EVERY day (i know it sounds self centered), and practice your angles and expressions and try it in different parts of your house for different light but I think you'd be able to better show yourself in a different photo.

Jan 17 10 07:58 pm Link

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Demetra D

Posts: 1133

New York, New York, US

Great port! I found a lot of beautiful pictures! This one didn't impress me though:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091210/16/4b21916d92c82_m.jpg
You just look a little bored..

Jan 17 10 08:01 pm Link

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Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Vanisa Dimitrova wrote:
Great port! I found a lot of beautiful pictures! This one didn't impress me though:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091210/16/4b21916d92c82_m.jpg
You just look a little bored..

You are absolutely gorgeous, but your 13th photo makes you look chunky. And by looking at the rest... You arent chunky!!!

Jan 17 10 08:05 pm Link

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Damianne

Posts: 15978

Austin, Texas, US

You have a lot of very stylized, conceptual shots, and then this sitting around:  https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/18/4b259e2b9aca0_m.jpg

Jan 18 10 12:14 am Link

Photographer

DC Photo - Inactive

Posts: 4949

Trenton, New Jersey, US

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f.jpg

Have to agree with the other comments, the focus just doesn't seem to be on you which it should be.

Jan 18 10 12:15 am Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Damianne wrote:
You have a lot of very stylized, conceptual shots, and then this sitting around:  https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/18/4b259e2b9aca0_m.jpg

Your 6th looks too snapshot ish smile

Jan 18 10 07:12 am Link

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Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

David Cajio Photography wrote:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f.jpg

Have to agree with the other comments, the focus just doesn't seem to be on you which it should be.

Your 8th. You have soooo much better in your portfolio!

Jan 18 10 07:13 am Link

Photographer

Sungoddess Studios

Posts: 5191

Keyport, New Jersey, US

Game, help me too.
I was never a fan of head cropping but this one is very well executed. the other head crop shots aren't not very good maybe if you have other shots from those shoots.
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091109/15/4af8a925a0f38.jpg
this is the best, should be your avatar.

Jan 18 10 07:16 am Link

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Red Rhapsody

Posts: 551

Toms River, New Jersey, US

This is my least favorite.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090118/20/4974023f568ca_m.jpg

Your facial expression just isn't working for me. I think it's what you're doing with your lips. They are very tense looking.

Jan 18 10 07:19 am Link

Photographer

CMartinPhotography

Posts: 2127

Edinburgh, Scotland, United Kingdom

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f_m.jpg
your not in focus sad

Jan 18 10 08:41 am Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Sungoddess Studios wrote:
Game, help me too.
I was never a fan of head cropping but this one is very well executed. the other head crop shots aren't not very good maybe if you have other shots from those shoots.
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091109/15/4af8a925a0f38.jpg
this is the best, should be your avatar.

Love your 8th, and 16th. Not a huge fan of #11 though.

Jan 18 10 08:48 am Link

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Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Red Rhapsody wrote:
This is my least favorite.

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090118/20/4974023f568ca_m.jpg

Your facial expression just isn't working for me. I think it's what you're doing with your lips. They are very tense looking.

Your porfolio is WONDERFUL, very stunning.
I least like your 3rd. I dont like the lack of focus with your eyes!

Jan 18 10 08:49 am Link

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Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

CAMARTINPHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f_m.jpg
your not in focus sad

10th. I know the look and style is to be blown out, but you live in a BEAUTIFUL scenic area. Would have loved it with some background.

Jan 18 10 08:51 am Link

Photographer

Sarah Parmeter

Posts: 97

Mountain View, Hawaii, US

I don't know what everyone is talking about but I love the that photo of you on the street. It may not be the most technical photo but it has more of a personality.  ITs your 5th photo that doesn't do anything for me.

Jan 18 10 09:36 pm Link

Photographer

M co

Posts: 461

Lakewood, Washington, US

https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091230/08/4b3b8256265d4_m.jpg


really its the fashion & unnatural poses.... but my fiance doesnt even think i have any sense in fashion so, don't take me for the truth.

Jan 19 10 02:00 am Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

Sarah Kanzler wrote:
I don't know what everyone is talking about but I love the that photo of you on the street. It may not be the most technical photo but it has more of a personality.  ITs your 5th photo that doesn't do anything for me.

Your 4th. The girl in the front is making a funny face, and looks really really short and oddly shaped in that shot.

Jan 19 10 04:19 pm Link

Model

Victoria Shaughnessy

Posts: 508

Arvada, Colorado, US

bump??

Jan 20 10 07:39 pm Link

Photographer

M co

Posts: 461

Lakewood, Washington, US

Victoria Shaughnessy wrote:
bump??

skipped?

Jan 21 10 12:32 pm Link

Model

chesty

Posts: 1978

Burbank, California, US

This is my least favorite. It's not a bad picture, but I don't think the look is as flattering to you.  Maybe it's the dress or the straight legged pose.
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091015/09/4ad749b8b10a8_m.jpg

Regarding the picture with the cigarette in the alley, and the picture of you in your sweater, sitting off to the left side, I think both images would be improved, if they were cropped closer, putting the focus back on you. Personally, I like both of those
shots.
https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/090717/19/4a6136b8a0a3f_m.jpg https://modelmayhm-9.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/091213/18/4b259e2b9aca0_m.jpg

Please pick one from my unassigned album...

Jan 21 10 01:02 pm Link