Forums > Critique > Serious Critique > would love a Critique

Photographer

Long Walk Home

Posts: 53

Forestville, California, US

would love to hear what you like, don't like, what works and what doesn't,  what you like to see more of or less of, etc.  Don't hold back,  My feelings wont be hurt by your opinion.

Jan 17 10 06:46 pm Link

Model

JordanSupernavage

Posts: 326

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US

i've never done one of these, but i'm bored and feel sick, so what the hell.  i think you're on the right track with your newest photos... however, as i scrolled down to your older ones i feel that you're lacking when it comes to lighting... whether it be location or studio shooting, your lighting is not good.  it doesn't draw me in to want to look at the photo, even if the photo is good.  but like i said, you're really getting on the right track with your newest work.  good luck!

Jan 17 10 06:51 pm Link

Model

Damianne

Posts: 15978

Austin, Texas, US

Ack, don't use a blown out photo, it makes me assume that the picture wasn't very good and you were trying to make it less obvious or you don't know how to edit.

I know it's a "thing" and I think you probably looked at the end product and liked it, but it's not a very good technique.

Jan 17 10 09:05 pm Link