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Photographer

Above the Fray

Posts: 879

Warrensburg, Missouri, US

Any comments or suggestions are welcome!!
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100117/22/4b540174e0361.jpg

Jan 17 10 10:40 pm Link

Retoucher

Ashish Arora

Posts: 2068

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Spirit Wind Designs wrote:
Any comments or suggestions are welcome!!
https://modelmayhm-3.vo.llnwd.net/d1/photos/100117/22/4b540174e0361.jpg

Thats a beautiful retouch, although I can notice some minor glitches on the forehead near to the right eyebrow, maybe you could correct that.

Otherwise, it seems a very peaceful, calm, and gorgeous work, its so subtle. The eyes, and the lips do not distract attention- just done as much as to perfection. Great!
Esp. eyes- nice work.

Personally, I would have added some sheen to the lips as they lack any and remove some of the distracting hair strands from the background smile

Jan 19 10 10:40 am Link