I just finished retouching some images from my latest shoot.  They are in the appropriate folder.

I know that you certainly are much better at this than I but can you take a minute and tell me what you think?  Does it look like I'm on the right track?  Lighting, Posing and Comp?  Retouch?

Avatar is from that shoot.

Thanks for taking the time!

I really like what you've done.  This seems to be a change in the direction you have been headed.

Good luck!

for the most part its fine, but for this one - you can smell that cheese (and I'm in Australia!)