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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Photographer
skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
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Michael Brittain
Posts: 2214
Wahiawa, Hawaii, US
I'm the last guy thats going to tell anyone not to use blur, in fact people that say they don't use blur are full of it IMO. But this would be one of the cases that people point to when the say bluring is bad. I think you over did it. On a positive note, at least you didn't make it look like a blotchy mess...
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
btdsgn wrote: I'm the last guy thats going to tell anyone not to use blur, in fact people that say they don't use blur are full of it IMO. But this would be one of the cases that people point to when the say bluring is bad. I think you over did it. On a positive note, at least you didn't make it look like a blotchy mess... thanks for your answer. i swear i did'nt use blur...you can see all the pores?!
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Neil Snape
Posts: 9474
Paris, Île-de-France, France
It's a style, if you like that style then you did well. I think the screen captures remove the detail. I see lots of detail but your change in density make it look very brushed as the light doesn't follow the contours. So it is well done for that style, nothing technically wrong, rather a lot of good technique to getting there. Personally , I like more crunchy detail, albeit realistic at times. Yet I'm in Europe, where we try for something more realistic.
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Ex Voto Studio
Posts: 4985
Columbia, Maryland, US
btdsgn wrote: I'm the last guy thats going to tell anyone not to use blur, in fact people that say they don't use blur are full of it IMO. But this would be one of the cases that people point to when the say bluring is bad. I think you over did it. On a positive note, at least you didn't make it look like a blotchy mess... I think there are other ways to have the final image end up looking like they used blur... but they got it without using blur. For example... I don't use blur... but my images look like I did... or so I am told by some... Just my opinion.
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Ex Voto Studio wrote:
I think there are other ways to have the final image end up looking like they used blur... but they got it without using blur. For example... I don;t use blur... but my images look like I did... or so I am told by some... Just my opinion. inverted high pass was involved...I'll upload the PSD ...
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Neil Snape wrote: It's a style, if you like that style then you did well. I think the screen captures remove the detail. I see lots of detail but your change in density make it look very brushed as the light doesn't follow the contours. So it is well done for that style, nothing technically wrong, rather a lot of good technique to getting there. Personally , I like more crunchy detail, albeit realistic at times. Yet I'm in Europe, where we try for something more realistic. I'm europe too
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
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Neil Snape
Posts: 9474
Paris, Île-de-France, France
selmakoparan wrote:
I'm europe too Then your style is not> The agencies are looking for clean work but in your book it has to be detailed. Now I know much is obliterated in retouch for L'Oreal etc, but that is not what counts. IF it works for you , your style that is , then there is hope . All of my too clean pictures fell flat on their face so to speak in all the big agencies. Of course the agencies don't necessarily give you work even if they do like your work and the style, there are other things too nothing to do with photography>
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Bloom_reflection
Posts: 350
Plovdiv, Plovdiv, Bulgaria
can you post the whole image it's hard to look on parts.IMO the eye color, skin color and texture looks a little bit unreal. Not bad just unreal for me
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Derek Cooper
Posts: 106
Kingston, Ontario, Canada
Looks plastic to me. Sorry!
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R A V E N D E U X
Posts: 33
New York, New York, US
I was going to say LOOOOOOOOOOOOL but then I saw you didn't use blur I see in the far right image there are some pores but you'll need to try again.
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wbphotography
Posts: 727
Bad Wurzach, Baden-Württemberg, Germany
for me it is too "clean" - i'm also not a fan of the high pass technique - i only use the d&b technique. but i'm not a pro - so it's just my opinion cheers, wolfgang
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Eithne Ni Anluain
Posts: 1424
Dundalk, Louth, Ireland
ok HP method does use blur, so technically you did use blur! anyhow I think your frequency separation is off hence why it looks like um...a doll? It's just "off" to my eyes. A full face would be more beneficial than sections I'd download the psd but I'm a lazy cow and busy downloading Dean Winchester - he's more important! *drool*
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
hmm ok i admint it looks very clean i was going for a very ''perfect'' effect since the model has a pinup style look which this look is more appropiate...thanks for all your honest comments!
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
RD Outpost wrote: I was going to say LOOOOOOOOOOOOL but then I saw you didn't use blur I see in the far right image there are some pores but you'll need to try again. ''LOOL'' ?! please a bit of respect i'm trying to get constructive critique to get better and your images are over-sharpen by the way.
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Neil Snape wrote:
Then your style is not> The agencies are looking for clean work but in your book it has to be detailed. Now I know much is obliterated in retouch for L'Oreal etc, but that is not what counts. IF it works for you , your style that is , then there is hope . All of my too clean pictures fell flat on their face so to speak in all the big agencies. Of course the agencies don't necessarily give you work even if they do like your work and the style, there are other things too nothing to do with photography> thank you! i'm a fan of yours! can you maybe show examples i dont get this difference with the ''styles'' between the continents?!
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Ni Anluain wrote: ok HP method does use blur, so technically you did use blur! anyhow I think your frequency separation is off hence why it looks like um...a doll? It's just "off" to my eyes. A full face would be more beneficial than sections I'd download the psd but I'm a lazy cow and busy downloading Dean Winchester - he's more important! *drool* thanks for the answer...what do you mean with the frequency separition being off?
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Eithne Ni Anluain
Posts: 1424
Dundalk, Louth, Ireland
selmakoparan wrote:
thanks for the answer...what do you mean with the frequency separition being off? Its going back to the 'doll' look. (which people like and people dont like, I'm the latter) The blur used may be of, hence the HP later when set to the linear light looks "off". I don't have any other way to describe it as its just what I see. I cant be of much help as its a perception thing.
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
Ni Anluain wrote:
Its going back to the 'doll' look. (which people like and people dont like, I'm the latter) The blur used may be of, hence the HP later when set to the linear light looks "off". I don't have any other way to describe it as its just what I see. I cant be of much help as its a perception thing. ok TY
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Michael Brittain
Posts: 2214
Wahiawa, Hawaii, US
After viewing the full image, I think it works with the style you were trying to achieve. Whether you use blur or not, the end result is you have a blurred image. On a side rant if your going to make an image that looks blurred why waste your time doing it a slower way. Just use BLUR. What I question is you say you were going for a âPerfectâ look. Although the skin has a illustrative feel, I donât think you went far enough with the image. Look beyond the skin. What about the hairline, the lashes, the brows? Why arenât they perfect? If you want perfect make everything perfect. $.02
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skphoto
Posts: 607
Zurich, Zurich, Switzerland
btdsgn wrote: After viewing the full image, I think it works with the style you were trying to achieve. Whether you use blur or not, the end result is you have a blurred image. On a side rant if your going to make an image that looks blurred why waste your time doing it a slower way. Just use BLUR. What I question is you say you were going for a âPerfectâ look. Although the skin has a illustrative feel, I donât think you went far enough with the image. Look beyond the skin. What about the hairline, the lashes, the brows? Why arenât they perfect? If you want perfect make everything perfect. $.02 you are totally right about the brows lashes and hairline i need to take care of all the details
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