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Retoucher

J Strath

Posts: 928

Los Angeles, California, US

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Hey, so I recently did some photo retouching for Kallia with some photos she modeled for with Larry Bradby, photographer.  Would you mind critiquing my editing?  Anything I could work on?  Likes' Dislike, etc.?  Just click on the link above for an example.  Okie doke, thank you for the input!!! ^_^

Feb 22 10 01:04 am Link

Photographer

Kent Kay Photography

Posts: 247

Palm Springs, California, US

HuggleMistress wrote:
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Hey, so I recently did some photo retouching for Kallia with some photos she modeled for with Larry Bradby, photographer.  Would you mind critiquing my editing?  Anything I could work on?  Likes' Dislike, etc.?  Just click on the link above for an example.  Okie doke, thank you for the input!!! ^_^

I like everything you did... you didn't go too far.  I don't like it when the skin pretty much turns to plastic.  The only thing I would have liked to have seen were longer eye lashes on the outside corners.  But that's just me.

Feb 22 10 01:16 am Link

Photographer

Narciscus Studio

Posts: 2012

Durban, KwaZulu Natal, South Africa

I also think its pretty good, but as the previous poster mentioned, extending the lashes in the corner's would maybe give it a nice finish. Did you use d&b to bring out the exposure in the eyes?

Feb 22 10 03:44 am Link