Marianne Michaela wrote:
hit me

(bonjour belgique, J'adore les frites )
Marianne,
Your port has some nice fashion shots and pseudo glamour.
It would be nice to have some life style type pics as well
I am listing the one below

But this is also an awesome headshot I must say

Delete those, IMHO not needed
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16789932  makes you look cheap
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16789938 makes you look fat (which is not true)

(.002 euro )

R Nello  wrote:
Hook me up please!

You have some really beautiful portraiture work I am impressed with.
Hmm I picked this one because I am wicked too


And she is no way going to Disney World like this. Even Goofy would get ideas, no way!

57 Unspoken Words wrote:
Sorry meant. My turn please!

I am still addressing the first page, sorry I am slow
I could have picked this

but for me it is too much happening there
instead I am picking this

despite that the garter belt is not pulled high enough on her tummy to show it better as it is too close to her panty, which is giving me the impression that it is falling a bit down, and because I belong to old school I would say garter straps should have been passed under her panty (panty worn last if you will) for a more erotic impact. Only initiated would see this so I am not going to make a big deal anyway. I would shot this with no panties and would still make it look classy at a side angle.
You get bonus points for showing toes and heels in this frame with no shoes which certainly cater well to all nyloneers out there.
I love her hair and rain drops on the window which paired with her face expression makes this picture an outstanding boudoir, eligible for going into my list.

Shirley Zhong wrote:
Me please

I like your fashion shoots, I love also the soft diffused moody pic below

But on the top one the cropping is a bit off
Instead I am listing this gorgeous man

Good job.

Listed.

Rik Image wrote:
Okay

I love your novel and funny fetish concepts like this one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18800525

He is a bit tied up sir, he won’t be able to make to the meeting genre
would be probably frowned upon by the fetcon people LOL

Your model album and black and white work is gorgeous, but I am disappointed
By seeing the one below

I am not sure if it is an edit or you actually had a model posing in front of that vintage caddy. IMHO Her outfit and hair looks too modern and incompatible with the background.
I picked this exotic beauty with style and camera presence instead.

Nude Elaine wrote:
I'm game. Check me out.

Wow, very hot mature and savvy beauty we have got here.
Now I cherry picked the photo below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20212976
which I find fabulous because you pose like a pro and the beauty of the set and background is tremendous.
Most of your pics are shot by either by a home camera or amateur level.
You may want to find a talented photographer, who thinks alike to re shot some of those concepts I have seen you seem to enjoy a lot.

Chris David Photography wrote:
So which would be my best?

I love few pics in this serie
gorgeous models beautiful settings and backdrop, great concepts.

First frame on top is a bit goofy
Second is getting better, lovely smile
Third is romantic, but shoes are cut off alert!
Fourth and fifth are the best.
Overall A plus portfolio with extra star stickers

Arynmo29 wrote:
Maybe to early in this genre to have a "best", but your input would be appreciated.

agree but I can always pick the best of the least worst hmm?
just kidding
LOL
And drum roll
you made it …
in my gorgeous women list LOL with this
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/22334349
not bad for I am quoting your profile for someone
"Just getting started!"

varton wrote:

Wow, very hot mature and savvy beauty we have got here.
Now I cherry picked the photo below
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20212976
which I find fabulous because you pose like a pro and the beauty of the set and background is tremendous.
Most of your pics are shot by either by a home camera or amateur level.
You may want to find a talented photographer, who thinks alike to re shot some of those concepts I have seen you seem to enjoy a lot.

Nude Elaine wrote:

Thank you so very much. I will try harder. I promise.

Vision Thing wrote:
Yes please !! Thanks in advance for the feedback.

Andy

Ok Andy let's see, you have mostly teen age  portrait work, nicely lighted and framed but pose and style are redundant and often models appear to be distracted or bored, your port give an impression of fancy facebook shots.
Try to diversify a bit and start coaching the models on what you want and not what they are willing to give you.
Here is my pick

varton wrote:

You have some really beautiful portraiture work I am impressed with.
Hmm I picked this one because I am wicked too


And she is no way going to Disney World like this. Even Goofy would get ideas, no way!

Ha!  Cool thanks!

Dimitar Bozinovski wrote:
Let me have it!

Here is my pick

why, because you will go places
great port, you have a lot of potential.

varton wrote:

Ok Andy let's see, you have mostly teen age  portrait work, nicely lighted and framed but pose and style are redundant and often models appear to be distracted or bored, your port give an impression of fancy facebook shots.
Try to diversify a bit and start coaching the models on what you want and not what they are willing to give you.
Here is my pick

Lela Jesse wrote:
me please?

Lela
Gorgeous pics all over your port, I can write a book about your amazing drop dead gorgeous look, and it would be a best seller

Love your pose and smirk, and I kinda know what you are thinking..
Yeah this thog is a loser, he thinks he can hit on me 

LOL

This is my pick

SFJ Photography wrote:
I wanna play!

Your work is fabulous
I love the styling and tire marks, below. It is pretty much beauty and filth concept

But I listed the one below because she has a killer look.

SheriBaldwinPhotography wrote:
Ooh, ooh me!

I love to add this one

great job and styling, love it!
listed!

Marissa N Martini wrote:
Mine ?

I would have preferred this one with naked feet, which would be very cute.

But I am listing anyway.
Try to break out of standard “everybody’s elses” pose.


I will take a short break and will be back soon.
I hope everyone is having fun.

Select Models wrote:
OoooooK...

Ok Gary, your work is so very good
and so much to see
few notes;
excessive use of wide lens, deforming faces
excessive use of cropping on certain photos that makes me feel as if I was leaving the dinner table hungry
reckless use of high heels even on incompatible wardrobe
but hey it looks great anyway, so this is
another hard portfolio to pick from but hey, I did it!
love this one

but added to my list the one below.

great job keep clicking man, looks super.

varton wrote:

I love to add this one

great job and styling, love it!
listed!

Thank you! I suspect it's pretty obvious that I love it, too.