Photographer
aasim
Posts: 1
Dubai, Dubai, United Arab Emirates
Model
Joannee
Posts: 96
Freehold, New Jersey, US
can you critique me please
Photographer
Jack Saul Photography
Posts: 46
London, England, United Kingdom
Sure, fire away (18+ portfolio)
Model
Miss CBlack
Posts: 65
Brentwood, California, US
Hi Varton, I appreciate the service you provide so many people and would love to hear input you have regarding my portfolio. Thank you in advance! Crista
Photographer
Double Exposure Tog
Posts: 13
Málaga, Andalusia, Spain
I'd like you critique on my Double Exposures if you have time. Thanks!
Photographer
ILPhoto
Posts: 7
Sedona, Arizona, US
Photographer
Tyler A Photography
Posts: 21
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, US
I would like mine done please
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
I was traveling past few months and I didn't get a chance to keep up with all those requests, I'll get to it asap. I apologize and I thank you for your indulgence and patience. Looking forward to visit your port soon, take care.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Nasreeny wrote: Please review my profile. I will be grateful. Unable to show profile #4063460 This member is either awaiting approval or has removed their profile from the site.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Meghan Congdon wrote: Please give me your feedback. Much appreciated! First impressions: hobbyist model Your Skill level: average Your creativity: photographer driven Your Work focus: fashion/beauty Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: some poses are too synthetic Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: What to delete: you are not in best light in this, sepia doesn't work for me. Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: A weak port for a model who has a lot of potential, work more with different photographers and pay if necessary for better photos. work on your poses as well. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
MelissaTai wrote: Hi Varton, I guess you are like the Godfather of MM, because everyone wants to come under your judging review. Very Nice ! .... Of Course Me Too . I have just a few photos so far but would appreciate your thoughts. Thank you have a great 2017 Thanks for your kind words. all links +18 First impressions: hobbyist level artistic nude port Your Skill level: beginner Your creativity: photographer driven Your Work focus: art, boudoirs Your MM Profile usefulness: sounds impressive. Your challenges: running out of viable poses, for instance I counted 8 photos single or both elbows high holding your hair/head like this Paid assignments: yes for nudes Your money shot: could be https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41949058 you guy's should remove from the field of view that ugly coat laying on the sand What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41738466 What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41949054 not useful nor flattering, you have better. Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I didn't critique photo quality as they are photographer's responsibility, so, work on your craft and poses and dress to impress, be more sophisticated and more demanding on the options for wardrobe and lingerie. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Eleanor Rose wrote: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback! First impressions: A port worthy of anyone's time, gorgeous look, with adaptability factor. Your Skill level: Very experienced Specific style: a Variety Your Work focus: erotic art bondage and glamor Your MM Profile usefulness: very specific and informative Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep up the good work Do you make my list?: yes
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
jessica wolff wrote: OOH please do me next!!! First impressions: sexy look Your Skill level: advanced Specific style: erotic vibes Your Work focus: beauty Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point Paid assignments: yes Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: It would be helpful to add a clear portrait. Do you make my list?: yes
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Red Baron Photography wrote: me too, please:)...! First impressions: pleasant and balanced portfolio from nice to mostly naughty Your Skill level: good all around Your creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30025579 +18 Specific style: I can tell from model gazes you are fun to work with. Your Work focus: a Variety of interests are noted Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: meh concepts in your bare curves album Paid assignments: yes What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your watermarks are distracting. too many photos of same model and looks in your port is not necessarily good. I would prefer your nudes in BW Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Lawrence Young wrote: same here First impressions: Beginner Your Skill level: Amateur Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: attention to detail, before clicking check the model so everything is properly composed see the jacket problem? -> Paid assignments: no Your money shot: What I like: good light flawed tint Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: your photos appear a bit over saturated, very tight crops won't add to the drama you are seeking. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Tarikwilkes wrote: I would appreciate a critique. First impressions: good "personality" shots Your Skill level: beginner Your Work focus: fashion fitness will work Your MM Profile usefulness: acceptable as a minimum Your challenges: posing and convincing you are a model, in male modeling looking down doesn't create drama or romantic mood it indicates weakness, google up for male poses. Paid assignments: nope Your money shot: What I like: but your gaze to camera is flawed, looking to uptight, relax a bit. Avoid to be in vignetting pics. Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: keep the fitness shots, replace everything else with some fancy clothing and shoot in some interesting locations. You will do well in boy girl duo shoots for commercials. Do you make my list?:
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Amy DeBellis wrote: Would like your opinion on mine please! Unable to show profile #3624774 This member is either awaiting approval or has removed their profile from the site.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Python Photos wrote: I'm impressed by all that you've done. If you'd like to add another, please consider my portfolio. First impressions: variety ranged from beauty to the beast Your Skill level: model driven Your Work focus: a variety Your MM Profile usefulness: useful but at the limit of tedious. Your challenges: I didn't care about zombie shots, in my case they rather make me laugh then scaring. Paid assignments: yes What I like: great use of location Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: <- pitfall, your tight crop just show a girl with a knife, and the story just ends there. You need more then the naughty gaze there to tell a story. This is the case also in some other photos. What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26570292 model looks cheap in that lingerie Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Isriah wrote: ? double dipped see here https://www.modelmayhem.com/forums/post … st19516767 First impressions: great look and versatility Your Skill level: very experienced Your Work focus: multi from gore to pinups Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great job, compliments Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
3RD-i
Posts: 4
London, England, United Kingdom
Oh, yes please.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Pivot Photography wrote: Hi Varton, Would love your feedback if you could. Thank you First impressions: nice job a good start Your Work focus: not defined in the port Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: composition: think purpose goal and style before clicking Paid assignments: no What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: for indoor photography use a light diffuser to avoid harsh shadows -> better model pose management avoid goofy looks. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Johnny Juarez wrote: Would love feedback First impressions: nice portrait work Your Skill level: good Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point Your challenges: not much happening in your port, just like still water Paid assignments: yes What I like: What to delete: model doesn't look good and bad crop, flat light Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Unfortunately your port falls in the category where I would forget in 10 minutes after my visit. your work is redundant and tedious for my taste. I'll visit again after you add some interesting concepts. Do you make my list?: no
Model
Cynthia Star
Posts: 8
Richmond Hill, Ontario, Canada
Me please
Photographer
Eros Fine Art Photo
Posts: 3097
Torrance, California, US
Wow! I'm absolutely impressed by your dedication and consistency to this thread. Kudos. I'd be glad to hear what you think.
Photographer
LT da Producer
Posts: 5
Charlotte, North Carolina, US
Hello, I'm new to MM i have no clue on how to search these forums I just picked a few topics that closely matches with what I am looking for so please excuse me. I just want feedback on some of the work i've shot please and thank you. I am looking to expand and grow with my skills and talents and work with more people and businesses in other states. please feel free to contact me or DM me I am available... thanks
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 3716
San Cristóbal de las Casas, Chiapas, Mexico
You did me last in 2013. Want to take another look? Best, Jorge
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
Jorge Kreimer wrote: You did me last in 2013. Want to take another look? Best, Jorge Sure I was busy for a while but I am continuing always this thread as my time permits.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
CThomas Photography wrote: I would love feedback as well. Thank you so much! First impressions: Nice BW work, good tones. Great port, focused on male beauty. Your Skill level: advanced Your Work focus: tasty nudes Your MM Profile usefulness: to the point Your challenges: it is hard not to reinvent the wheel in the nudes rubrique Paid assignments: hell yes Your money shot: What I like: What to delete: although valid for a female model, this pose is perceived by me as tacky Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You are a good shot, and you shouldn't limit yourself only on masculin subjects. Do you make my list?: yes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41439110
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2758
New York, New York, US
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