Model
Psaldana84
Posts: 3
NORTH HOLLYWOOD, California, US
Any feedback is appreciated
Photographer
DougGoldmanPhotography
Posts: 6
Aberdeen, Maryland, US
Please elevate me with ur experience. Thank u.
Photographer
HeartSpur
Posts: 73
Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
GSG Photography Studio wrote: i would love to hear! Unable to show Member #1016693
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Pauline Yee wrote: I would love a critique ! First impressions: Vogue model Your Skill level: impressive work Specific style: fashion Your Work focus: commercial beauty glamor Your MM Profile usefulness: Useful and "1st degree black-belt" ? good job to scare the photographers. Your challenges: Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: compliments very good job. Do you make my list?: listed
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Psaldana84 wrote: Any feedback is appreciated First impressions: some redundant pic and snapshots found. Port geared to attract adult paid work. Your Skill level: beginner with a look Your Work focus: adult erotic Your MM Profile usefulness: they will get the idea Paid assignments: yes, depends on the genre Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Not sure if you need my advice. You have a good look and it is up to you what to do with it. Do you make my list?: No
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
DougGoldmanPhotography wrote: Please elevate me with ur experience. Thank u. First impressions: Excellent work! Your Skill level: Advanced Your creativity: Great concepts Specific style: Retro and modern glamor lifestyle Your Work focus: beauty Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: perspectives and crops can be improved Paid assignments: Yes Your money shot: What I like: great light on this Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Great mainstream photography Do you make my list?: yes
Photographer
JSouthworth
Posts: 1806
Kingston upon Hull, England, United Kingdom
You're welcome to try it, as long as you don't try to charge me for it.
Photographer
Shadow Dancer
Posts: 9779
Bellingham, Washington, US
Would like your opinion, thank you!
Photographer
Teej001
Posts: 1
Bath, England, United Kingdom
Photographer
PHOTOPHYLIA
Posts: 25
Suwanee, Georgia, US
I am interested to know your opinion. BR DP
Photographer
French Hill Studios
Posts: 1
Orangeville, Ontario, Canada
Looks like there's a long lineup here, but I'll bite.
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
HeartSpur wrote: Yes please! First impressions: Interesting work, some out of focus photos in quarantine remote shoots Your Skill level: average Your creativity: model driven Specific style: lifestyle Your Work focus: mild nudity, and some attempt to shoot avant garde Your MM Profile usefulness: will do Your challenges: Model driven and subjective art style. Life style album is not much interesting. Paid assignments: tfp Your money shot: What I like: good portraiture What to delete: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46285480 https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46699100 model out of focus on both Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I see no point doing remote shoots and post in your port out of focus pic. Your grip on themes are loose. Your message if any in those photos falls short. Models appear to be distracted and lack camera presence. You can fix those easily. Do you make my list?: No
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
JSouthworth wrote: You're welcome to try it, as long as you don't try to charge me for it. Charge for it ??!! Thanks for the permission. First impressions: visual approach to nude art Your Skill level: shooter Your Work focus: nudes Your MM Profile usefulness: what you read is not what you get Your challenges: You do well in figure nudes and specifically second raw from top of that 4 photo set is note worthy although I would prefer in monochrome. The others don't impress me much perhaps because of insufficient model engagement and drape backgrounds that are distracting. Some of those frames could have been shot in more natural outdoor settings and would look more credible as a work of art. Paid assignments: TFP Keep shooting! Do you make my list?: No
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
PHOTOPHYLIA wrote: I am interested to know your opinion. BR DP First impressions: Old school, accomplished Your Skill level: Advanced Work focus : All genres / fetish art glamor retro boudoir fashion Your MM Profile usefulness: To the point Paid assignments: YES Your money shot: Listed What I like: Most everything Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Amazing work in your portfolio, great retro shots, I rarely came across past 15 years I have been on here. Keep shooting Do you make my list?: YES but unable to list https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47533100
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
JSouthworth
Posts: 1806
Kingston upon Hull, England, United Kingdom
Varton wrote: Charge for it ??!! Thanks for the permission. First impressions: visual approach to nude art Your Skill level: shooter Your Work focus: nudes Your MM Profile usefulness: what you read is not what you get Your challenges: You do well in figure nudes and specifically second raw from top of that 4 photo set is note worthy although I would prefer in monochrome. The others don't impress me much perhaps because of insufficient model engagement and drape backgrounds that are distracting. Some of those frames could have been shot in more natural outdoor settings and would look more credible as a work of art. Paid assignments: TFP Keep shooting! Do you make my list?: No Thanks for your feedback.
Photographer
Shadow Dancer
Posts: 9779
Bellingham, Washington, US
Thanks Varton, I appreciate your review.
Model
Sylvia Lovell
Posts: 40
Los Angeles, California, US
Hi, can you critique my portfolio? Thank you
Photographer
Acraftman1313
Posts: 223
Greensboro, North Carolina, US
Would appreciate your thoughts.
Photographer
MB93
Posts: 1
Borlänge, Dalarna, Sweden
Photographer
Sipes
Posts: 3
Baltimore, Maryland, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Sylvia Lovell wrote: Hi, can you critique my portfolio? Thank you First impressions: Diverse portfolio Your Skill level: intermediate Your creativity: photographer drvien Specific style: Beauty glamor Your Work focus: Boudoir style Your MM Profile usefulness: Very informative Paid assignments: yes What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your portfolio suggest you will make a great match with skilled photographers. You should also explore and tap into commercial modeling. Do you make my list?: No
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Acraftman1313 wrote: Would appreciate your thoughts. First impressions: variety, good BW work Your Skill level: intermediate Your creativity: model driven Specific style: boudoir glamor Your Work focus: eye candy Your MM Profile usefulness: Your challenges: Creating drama by means of photo crops. In most cases the "action" is just not there Paid assignments: yes/tfp Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42975551 What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: You should compensate for wide angle lens aberrations around edges, pose the subject carefully to avoid feet or other deformations. Do you make my list?: Yes in vintage vibes https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/42473391
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Deviant Divas Design wrote: me please First impressions: Fetish Your Skill level: intermediate Your creativity: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/4183300 Specific style: Not safe for work (NSFW) Your Work focus: Bondage Your MM Profile usefulness: Could have been useful if you spoke about your skill set in fetish Your challenges: pretty generic work in rope bondage fetish genre. Most fetish photographers like to expose broken souls in their photography and they take their work very personal. In your work the genre is imaged as "a witnessed style" as opposed to "lived style" It is hard to image bondage and fetish if one is not truly into it, ( in my worthless opinion). Many focus on fancy knots, artistic symmetries, props etc. but neglect to include in their composition true helplessness, the intensity of the submission. Paid assignments: Yes Your money shot: What I like: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/43901242 very retro feel like in old "Gaze" pulp magazines What to delete: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Your fetish style photoshoots although visually appealing will not necessarily provoke the kind of emotion seasoned connoisseurs would expect. Be more personal while imaging such scenes. Not many models can pull this off. I would pick models truly into this lifestyle before i aim and click. Do you make my list?: No
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
MB93 wrote: Feedback appreciated! First impressions: Not a port I would go back to, many redundant photos. Your Skill level: beginner Specific style: probably noir style Your Work focus: bw art Your MM Profile usefulness: not much there Paid assignments: no Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Good strides but nothing appealing. You appear to photograph in "boredom" in black and white mistaking it for art. Color action photos are done better. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Sipes wrote: Yes Please First impressions: not sure if there is a specific reason all your photographs are taken in landscape orientation Your Skill level: good mastery on natural and artificial light Specific style: Erotic Art Your Work focus: BW and customer oriented Your MM Profile usefulness: useful Your challenges: Focusing on one genre too tightly Paid assignments: yes Your money shot: https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47846517 What I like: I usually don't care for art shoots but I like the faint lighting in most of your photos. Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: I encourage you to keep up with the specific style as long as it can pay bills. If not there are out there more choices. Do you make my list?: no
Photographer
RC Images
Posts: 1242
Silver Spring, Maryland, US
Yes, please (Note: I stopped shooting back in 2014, but at some point might pick it up again. When I find the free time.)
Photographer
RC Images
Posts: 1242
Silver Spring, Maryland, US
Photographer
RC Images
Posts: 1242
Silver Spring, Maryland, US
Photographer
Platform A Photography
Posts: 2
Charlotte, North Carolina, US
I’d love a review, just starting to seriously use studio lighting. Thanks!
Photographer
Platform A Photography
Posts: 2
Charlotte, North Carolina, US
Sorry for the double post, site is a little wonky sometimes.
Photographer
eyephotoread
Posts: 57
Chicago, Illinois, US
I need to add a lot of new stuff, and generally plan to get back into taking pictures again more regularly, but appreciate a critique on what I have on right now. Maybe see where to focus and where to grow.
Photographer
Modelphilia
Posts: 1007
Hilo, Hawaii, US
My current MM port is not so current anymore, with virtually no traveling models out here even in these post-Covid days. And then there's the usual lack of MUAs and stylists. It could use some pruning, but please take a look. Everything in the port was done on a TF basis, quite spontaneously, solely with natural daylight, and primarily with amateur models. Thanks!
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Photographer
Varton
Posts: 2755
New York, New York, US
Platform A Photography wrote: I’d love a review, just starting to seriously use studio lighting. Thanks! First impressions: Nice tones and vibes. Your Skill level: Good attention to details, and some post work that sits well. Your creativity: Doing more with less. Specific style: Dramatic boudoirs Your Work focus: Beauty of female form. Your MM Profile usefulness: To the point. Your challenges: Model posing. Sometime they cease to be the subject and left to fall in the composition as another object. Paid assignments: yes What I like: Suggestions/ Bottom line/verdict: Good work in general but need to manage model poses better. This one https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47935859 is a marvelous shot however model demeanor leaves to be desired. Brighten your photos a bit, lower the spook factor, add variety and color to your style. Don't let anyone to yawn on sleepy poses, uneventful compositions. Do you make my list?: No
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