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Yaela Yaela

Posts: 186

Split, Split-Dalmacija, Croatia

Did a shoot this week, and here is the result. Please let me know what you think of them! Thanks!!

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371e474fc57.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cba06126.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cb564c8a.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cbe458f3.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371caed2213.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cc407169.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cc893b93.jpg
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130306/02/51371cfcc99fe.jpg

Mar 06 13 08:20 am Link

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RachelReilly

Posts: 1748

Washington, District of Columbia, US

You desperately need to work on your facial expressions, you have an open mouth and the same void expression in each shot.
ESP someone with a round face such as yours, practice in front of a mirror and work it out girl!
These pictures are all very contrived.. I wish I was just seeing sexy

Mar 06 13 09:21 am Link

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Shot By Adam

Posts: 8095

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

RachelReilly wrote:
You desperately need to work on your facial expressions, you have an open mouth and the same void expression in each shot.

This.

It looks like someone copied and pasted one expression on all of your photos. Not good. You also should have someone else do your makeup. It looks as though your foundation on your forehead and around your eyes is very inconsistent with the makeup being applied on your cheeks and chin. Hence, the result is you get really bad hot spots in some areas of your face and dark areas on others.

Mar 06 13 09:29 am Link

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Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

RachelReilly wrote:
You desperately need to work on your facial expressions, you have an open mouth and the same void expression in each shot.
ESP someone with a round face such as yours, practice in front of a mirror and work it out girl!
These pictures are all very contrived.. I wish I was just seeing sexy

Open mouth not working for me either

Mar 06 13 10:06 am Link

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Yaela Yaela

Posts: 186

Split, Split-Dalmacija, Croatia

Yeah thats what the photographer asked all the time. Open mouth and serious look. I love to change too get various expresions but yeah...ill just to my own thing next time haha...thanks for the critiques

Mar 06 13 10:51 am Link

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