Photographer

mercee

Posts: 29

Berlin, Berlin, Germany

Hi,

I am still learning on retouching and I would like you guys to give me a constructive critique.

in those two images i did everything (clone, heal, D&B etc.) and a tiny bit FT.

here are two images that i recently photographed and retouched.

https://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a442/Set_Nav_Rec/Astrid_01_zpsc8272681.jpg

https://i1036.photobucket.com/albums/a442/Set_Nav_Rec/Astrid_02_zpse11f64fd.jpg

thanks in advance.

Regards,
Cervantes

Nov 13 14 04:45 am Link

Retoucher

BoazR

Posts: 129

Jerusalem, Jerusalem, Israel

I really like the results.
One small thing, on the second image it's slightly too grainy, but it might just be me

Dec 01 14 06:05 am Link

Retoucher

ulianaeme

Posts: 94

Rio de Janeiro, Rio de Janeiro, Brazil

I would pull out everything from the eyes if you work with RAWs.  Faces are very flat and skin color is inconsistent. need to work on lips.
On the second image you fixed the kin but forgot the shoulder. Faces are lighter then the rest of the body.

Skin looks too sharp to me.

Dec 01 14 10:21 am Link