Trying to advance beyond the... well, blur style of skin smoothing... I've started working with some D&B for skin smoothing and some contouring. I'd love your opinions... Give me the good, the bad, and the ugly. Tell me what you see that I need to change, and I'll get it done. All in an effort to get better... so thanks for your comments!! Unedited image: (http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7578/1571 … 107d_z.jpg) Edited image: (https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7472/161 … fb49_z.jpg) Jan 20 15 06:58 pm Link It's a little hard to see with the images being as small as they are. Maybe link to larger versions (don't have to be huge - but something at least 600 x 900) Jan 21 15 08:09 pm Link Well done! You brought out the focus to her face and eyes really well, like what you did to the eyes a lot. When you do this and ignore the hand, it just looks fake! Spend some time/attention to it as well. Next time, try working on a better image with more details like skin or hair if you really want to master the art of retouching and share results. Jan 24 15 09:42 pm Link Thanks a million for the critique!! When you say that you would address the hand... do you mean to D&B the hand as well as the face/chest? I know that it''s not as bright... which was on purpose to keep focus on the face/dress. But if you have suggestions, I''ll sure take em. Here is an image that I just finished... more details in the face to D&B and color correct. Sometimes, I feel as though I see splotches of color and for the life of me can''t exactly figure out how to address it... so I started using selective color to try and fix. The eye bags still get me though... The only thing that I did not retouch in this image is the hair. I am going through Krunoslav Stifter's D&B DVD over the next week or so, then will go over Natalia's and learn more about hair retouching. Would love a critique or two on this image from educated eyes. Thanks to all... Retouched Image http://thigpenimages.com/wp-content/upl … _22721.jpg Unretouched Image http://thigpenimages.com/wp-content/upl … ouched.jpg Jan 26 15 09:02 pm Link |