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Oana T

Posts: 220

Deva, Hunedoara, Romania

Hello folks,

CC are welcome! smile

https://s30.postimg.org/ba4uhjhkh/Y5_A8976.jpg
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I saw that few posts have no answer. I'm curious why. smile I think that critique are constructive in any way you say. Thank you for your time!

Feb 25 16 05:13 am Link

Retoucher

3869283

Posts: 1464

Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria

Very good job overall.

My remarks would be: This is a beauty shot and it is obviously about perfect beauty (as most beauty shots). I would remove the mole and arm hair as well as the slightly visible veins on her biceps and the wrinkle below the eye. Another thing I notice is the slight color difference between face and body. I would also add some hair in the gap on the left side of the image as her head already looks too big anyway. I haven't seen it at 100% but at this zoom level I can notice the visible retouching of the hair: http://snag.gy/yedmb.jpg

Feb 25 16 08:15 am Link

Retoucher

Oana T

Posts: 220

Deva, Hunedoara, Romania

anchev wrote:
Very good job overall.

My remarks would be: This is a beauty shot and it is obviously about perfect beauty (as most beauty shots). I would remove the mole and arm hair as well as the slightly visible veins on her biceps and the wrinkle below the eye. Another thing I notice is the slight color difference between face and body. I would also add some hair in the gap on the left side of the image as her head already looks too big anyway. I haven't seen it at 100% but at this zoom level I can notice the visible retouching of the hair: http://snag.gy/yedmb.jpg

Thank you so much for your advice! I appreciate! smile

Feb 25 16 08:41 am Link

Retoucher

not here

Posts: 560

Providence, Rhode Island, US

10/10 It's gorgeous

May 23 16 06:10 pm Link

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Traciee D

Posts: 446

Lafayette, Louisiana, US

nice job!  The only thing I see that needs a small rework is her right hand.  It is drawing my eye straight to it instead of elsewhere.  The tone needs to be matched a little better.

Jul 07 16 07:40 pm Link