Hi everybody, i'm a fresh member of model mayhem and looking forward to work as a retoucher. I have uploaded a few pictures to my portfolio, it would be great to hear some feedback. Should i include before and after photos or only the after? It would be great so hear some feedback on the quality of my work. I'm pretty happy with it myself and feel confident to offer a good job.

Thanks and see you.

No one?

Choose an industry you want to work in - Wedding Photography, High Fashion, Beauty, Auto (cars), etc, and build your portfolio towards it and use the people MAKING it in that industry as a reference.

From your port I can't tell what you're really interested in doing. You're retouching images, sure, but not only do I recommend to learn the basics (d&b / masking / using adjustment layers / sharpening and masking nondestructively / color theory / color weights / color semiotics / semiology in general / managing color spaces [cmyk/rgb and what they mean / light and shadow in photography), but you should also choose WHAT you want to do.