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Retoucher

kirrajaiyd

Posts: 87

Newcastle, New South Wales, Australia

Hi guys,
I've been retouching for about a year on and off, i'd really love someone to help me out and give me some feedback on this image! I'd really appreciate it, thankyou in advance!
https://farm2.staticflickr.com/1547/25950774044_68a5c8609a_b.jpg

Apr 21 16 02:14 am Link

Retoucher

3869283

Posts: 1464

Sofia, Sofija grad, Bulgaria

Hard to say without being able to see in full size but here are a few things you might want to pay attention to:

- The zone of her ribs just below the bra is more pinkish. I would fix that.
- The reflection in the zone above the stone is quite strange. Have you smeared the borders? It looks like dark oil, not like water.
- The dry stone is weird too. There is visible cloning also.
- The contour of her left leg has some strangeness too.
- I would remove the small hair piece below her arm. It is a distracting visual element.

The thing which I like is the overall color look.

I hope that helps.

Apr 22 16 01:54 am Link

Retoucher

not here

Posts: 560

Providence, Rhode Island, US

Good retouch but her arm looks way lighter than her lower body.8/10.

May 23 16 06:03 pm Link