Photographer

Mask Photo

Posts: 1453

Fremont, California, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/160721/13/579136064af32.jpg
(i'm not showing before/after yet because I'd like an honest first impression)

Jul 21 16 05:27 pm Link

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Entsafter

Posts: 5

Nuremberg, Bavaria, Germany

Hey!
I don't know what you wanted to achieve but I think there is WAY too much yellow in this picture.
It also looks like you went overboard with the sharpening. Especially the areas around her legs look oversharpened.
The watermark looks kinda meh.

I'm not gonna comment on the model or the photo itself since it's highly subjectiv.

I hope you have a nice day!

Jul 27 16 02:25 am Link

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Elena Vasilevich

Posts: 49

Hrodna, Hrodna, Belarus

A little work with the composition of this photo. Perhaps you need to do a T-shirt on the model a little brighter, the picture will look more positive

https://yadi.sk/i/NqAMtwzctmDKi

Jul 30 16 07:33 am Link