Hi guys,
I am currently building a portfolio in order to apply for my first retouching jobs, and I would love to hear from people on this forum what I could improve on, what is already good, and what doesn't work at all.
Here is the link to my latest retouch:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/41098871

Please have a look and let me know what you think.
Feel free to have a look at the other photos on my profile as well and give your opinion on strengths and weaknesses in my work:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/3864729/viewall

Any feedback is welcome.

Regards,

Stian Wallmark

Hi,

You obviously have a good grasp of DNB which is good. It doesn't look like you used freq sep which is great! correct me if i'm wrong.

i would say for personal work pull back a little bit on dnb and go for a more natural look.

Jeff

www.jeffreychan.com

Try working on the eyes, as the left eye is closed more than the right. sharpen the hair glitter more and tidy up her left eyebrow