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Model

Lelo

Posts: 6

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Hey friends! I uploaded a couple of pictures from a past shoot. Could I get some honest feedback? Be as blunt and straightforwad as you can haha I can take it!

Dec 16 17 08:52 am Link

Photographer

Lee_Photography

Posts: 9863

Minneapolis, Minnesota, US

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/171215/17/5a34721d7014f_m.jpg
What happened to your feet?
For me I prefer to have a crystal clear image, with out the foggy effect


https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/171215/17/5a347227634e2_m.jpg
You look so stiff, jacket is hiding your midsection, pull your right hand toward your hip so we can see your long lovely fingers

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/170815/00/5992a189b63db_m.jpg
Still like your look in this image best, we can see your form, you look so happy
[As stated before hook your thumb on pocket do not push it all the way in, would love to see models left hand]

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, I wish you well

Dec 16 17 02:38 pm Link

Model

Lelo

Posts: 6

Memphis, Tennessee, US

Thanks so much! Really helpful!!

Dec 16 17 09:09 pm Link