I want to learn from my mistakes so please give me feedback

I think your compositions are well thought out, especially the vertical pictures.  I don't want to initially like the horizontal picture with the colors in the background, but it has a lot of movement to it.  Whether you know it or not, I think you have an eye for composition.  I'm not totally sure of your background in photo, but there are some photographers that you should look into - Henri Cartier-Bresson and Philip Lorca DiCorcia.  These two photographers are very reliant on great composition, Cartier-Bresson's photos are spur of the moment/action photos, and DiCorcia is staged and set up (more along your line of vision from what I've seen).  They might inspire you to try some new things.  Keep it up!