Everything: individuals images, album organization, and About Me. Thanks, Jeff

The profile has a desperate, amateurish tone to it. "Please collaborate with me." "Please bring an escort." Explaining TFP and then saying that you do TFP to discover ways to capture natural-light images. It just doesn't mesh well with the "very experienced" self-rating.

The portfolio is a mixed bag and could use some heavy culling.


Good use of natural light. The image has warmth and depth.


Pure snapshot.


Good use of light and an engaging model.


Same model... snapshot. Bad angle on the face, poorly framed, and that thing on her head dominates in a bad way.




Are these going to induce models to collaborate with you?

--Definitely need to watch the lighting on the face.  Some have that "monster lighting" look:  The 2nd image is so not even flattering.


--Edit your photos.  Some have major discolorations; eg; purple/magenta legs/arms/hands.


--I am fan of breaking the rule of space sometimes, but, some of these are just awkwardly placed:


--Some of the poses look too posy/contrived.  Of the things is maybe cut down on the hand on chin/face look:


--Cut down on the horizontal chest up shots.  I typically don't find them interesting.  Either do full, 3/4, waist up, or headshot.


--Get rid of your street photography images.  There's about 15 of them.

--And, lastly, this by far my favorite.  I'm so drawn to the image, except for the headdress. 


Overall, I think you need to work on lighting, editing, and posing.

Thanks to both reviewers for many good suggestions. Jeff