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Photographer

Chris Ryan Photography

Posts: 10

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

New images of athletics and nude. Please critique and if you enjoy my work add me. I’ll be posting more often.

Nov 26 18 09:06 pm Link

Model

Miss Melissa1

Posts: 408

Antioch, California, US

There are a few great photos in your port and your off to a good start in my opinion (Im not an expert but thought i might be able to help).
A great Photographer once told me a very good piece of advice and I think it would be helpful to you as well.
WAY overboard on the vignetting. I think you do well with natural lighting.
Xoxo

Dec 06 18 06:40 pm Link

Photographer

Bartcephus

Posts: 20

Mount Pleasant, Texas, US

In my humble opinion, your model was limited in her poses. 

Also, I think your subject could have benefited from some additional fill light as the shadows from the trees and overhead sun were not that flattering to her.  Use a reflector and/or fill flash to even out the exposure of your subject and I think you will feel less compelled to use the vignetting to bring attention to your model.

Hope your Holiday Season is wonderful and full of fun!

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Dec 07 18 02:19 am Link

Photographer

Photo Art by LJ

Posts: 224

Las Vegas, Nevada, US

The #1 best thing you can do at this point is invest some $$$ in some photography courses. CreativeLive has some excellent ones. If you pour yourself into learning, you will see your work progress. Good luck.

Dec 23 18 01:04 am Link