joejonest wrote:
Portfolio is small at the moment but adding more soon hopefully.

Hi Joe,
Watch the cropping. Don't chop up body parts, frame the model and have to stop all the wrinkles.

have fun!

Shadow Dancer wrote:
With the exception of the linked photo, you are shooting up the model's nose in this series, not flattering.
The brighter, more reflective glitter-paint detract's from the eyes of the model. I felt like this reduced my sense of "connection" with the subject/photo. Keep shooting and experimenting!

It's damned annoying to have the OP delete that series of images based on one critique. I'd have liked to see those images. I find that one image fascinating. Yes, these eyes don't dominate, but the smeared multicolored paint forces a concentration on that model's incredible facial structure. I could stare at that face for weeks.

As for the remaining series of the blonde in white, every one in the series is a miss. Chopped off the hands every time.