Hi. I am looking for feedback on the first eight images in my new work album. They are actually four images, both in color and black and white. I would like feedback on the images themselves, and whether you like the color or black and white better. Comments on my other work is always welcome, but I am looking specifically for these images. I will have some more of this model soon as well. Thanks Phil Gold Jul 19 19 09:57 am Link Logo on all images looks tacky. The inquiry into preference for color or black and white is pretty much a non-issue. Model's face is blurry, the bright spot above her head is dstracting. Delete. Static composition, not sure what it is supposed to depict? Color adds more interest but not a compelling image. Bright area in background very distracting, could crop to a head and shoulders and burn that down dark. Saveable but maybe not worth it. It appears the model is going to lower her bikini bottom and poop on the wall. Delete. [url=https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45590128] It is one thing to find an interesting if chaotic background, it is another to work with it and create an effective image. Keep trying!!! Jul 20 19 11:23 pm Link Phil Gold wrote: Hi Phil, Some models aren't really models with hair dyes 7 months removed, to bangs that allow for one type of hair styling , fingers in mouth, hands across legs, no posing by you,posing is a free for all. you're not shooting for features. Belly button is a huge feature and not showcased for one. You don't want models leaning in . leaning in. Jul 23 19 08:39 am Link |