Aspect Art Photography wrote:
Go on then, I’m in!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45581469 18+

DTP - Photography wrote:
Hope I have something you like

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46098822 18+
Stunning model!!

Rik Chapman wrote:
Your port is really amazing, would appreciate you taking a look at mine.

Love the mood on this one!!

Rik Chapman wrote:
Julia was great to shoot with... that was all her.

Cool! She is stunning!!! The light on her is perfect for the mood!

Thatcher Photography wrote:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46098822 18+
Stunning model!!

Thank you. That was an amazing shoot overseas.

sevvo wrote:
I'd welcome constructive criticism:

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47236731

This is your best at this time. Such a great mood! Super cute model!! Nice area! Great dress!!!!! Nice job!

Ways to improve it...

I would have made her take the watch off unless apple (or whoever made it) was paying for the shot. It pulls focus..

I would make a smaller more artsy logo if you feel you must use one. It also pulls focus..

I would also make it a bit tighter of a frame on her to avoid the wrist of the person on the right side of the frame.

Hope this helps!!

DTP - Photography wrote:

Thank you. That was an amazing shoot overseas.

NP!!

Camille Baratti wrote:
If you can get to me, would love your opinion! I do have a crap ton of photos. Slowly trying to replace my many selfies with professional photos.

You nailed it! More pro shots will get you more pro work. Looks like you have the potential. Many times, unprofessional shots can do more harm than good for getting you new jobs.

1st - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29599990

2nd - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29762325

Keep it up!! Best of luck!!!!

Creative Technicians wrote:
yes please!

Love your model here!! Nice job!!

1st - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47042614 18+
2nd - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47042600 18+

Jon Ayotte wrote:
I'm curious.

Cool shot!!! Love the pose!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47024328 18+

olaszkolda wrote:

It was hard to pick a favorite shot. Lots of good ones, but many of them are the same or super similar. I would try to narrow them down to show your very best from each set. It will make your port much stronger and more fun to look through. My 2 cents...
I think this one is one of my favorites..


Here is another top shot..

Thatcher Photography wrote:

Love your model here!! Nice job!!

1st - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47042614 18+
2nd - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47042600 18+

Thanks man, she's great!  I love your headshots in particular, and of course...

https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/1 … 4656cc.jpg

Model Anna Murphy wrote:
Yes please and ty so much

Fav!!!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47200249

Jessica Darwinian wrote:
Let me know which nudes you like best - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/4658929/viewall

looking to improve and would love positive comments on the photos but critiques to get better here.

thanks y'all!

-Jess

Tighten your frames. Even on the wide shot ones. Make it more about the model.. Or try to balance the frame as far as subject to frame balance goes.

Here is my fav...


2nd fav..
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47316756

Jessica Darwinian wrote:
Thanks so much! I appreciate the critique!!

NP!

Keep it up!!!

Deep Visions wrote:
I'm game!

Best shot...

markymanno wrote:
I would love if you looked through the two albums I have posted and pick one from each. Thanks so much!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47335479

Make the shot on the left a shot by itself. The right shot is a good stand alone too. Direct eye contact for this headshot would be a good addition to your work...
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/47335434

KingCityBennyBen wrote:
let me know..

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44101673

XLN PHOTOGRAPHY wrote:
Me too!

Nice!

Vance C McDaniel wrote:
The oldest game on MM. It's good to be back!

https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/44828952