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Photographer

HeartSpur

Posts: 73

Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China

Did a collaboration with a fashion stylist this weekend - the first I've done. Quite excited about the images and would love to share it with you guys. Let me know what you think! You can find them in the commercial folder.

Mar 16 20 02:20 am Link

Model

Schoetze

Posts: 286

New York, New York, US

Unfortunately I think the "commercial" work is the least attractive of your port.  Very blah with monotone colors.  I also don't like the models heads chopped off.  On the bright side, the rest of your portfolio is well done.

Mar 16 20 01:21 pm Link

Photographer

HeartSpur

Posts: 73

Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China

Schoetze wrote:
Unfortunately I think the "commercial" work is the least attractive of your port.  Very blah with monotone colors.  I also don't like the models heads chopped off.  On the bright side, the rest of your portfolio is well done.

Oh yes, that was done to fit the look of the brand. Some of the pictures were focused on the jewellery.
Thanks for the comment

Mar 16 20 05:56 pm Link

Photographer

Orca Bay Images

Posts: 33877

Arcata, California, US

Quentin Studios wrote:
Some of the pictures were focused on the jewellery.

Hard to tell, since the jewelry figures so small in the image. You don't need a woman's torso and half her head to show off a bracelet.

Mar 16 20 09:48 pm Link