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Model

Randomusername

Posts: 24

Chicago, Illinois, US

I want to clean up my portfolio more . I’m new to model and I think it has been a fun hobby to do on my free time . Lately because of the coronavirus I have a lot of free time and I can’t do anything with it . So i decided hey you know what why don’t you all help me clean up my portfolio. Just let me know which one you would remove and which one you would keep . Tell me why if you’d like or any advice you can give me

Thanks hope everyone is doing ok during the coronavirus panademic

Apr 20 20 11:00 pm Link

Photographer

Rough Hewn Images

Posts: 52

Salem, Oregon, US

To me:
Best - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45854500  Good composition, good and effective mood lighting, and a very good pose!

Worst - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46082769  This is mainly because of the wonky background.  The pose is fine but the background is very distracting.  Also the lighting is a bit harsh. The photo would probably be improved with a better crop cutting out the wall with the large shadow.

Apr 21 20 11:41 am Link

Photographer

Fist Full of Ish

Posts: 2301

Aiken, South Carolina, US

To me:
Best - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45854339 I just like it.
Worst - https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/46192018 Because of the lighting and contrast.  You are fine.
I also agree with Zeelon.
I also like https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/45830290

Apr 21 20 08:54 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Salo

Posts: 11732

Olney, Maryland, US

I like this pose best even though your eyes are a bit squinty:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/200304/10/5e5ff027c31e1_m.jpg
Oh yes, I must comment on your big, bold, black, bars!

Apr 21 20 09:09 pm Link

Model

Randomusername

Posts: 24

Chicago, Illinois, US

Mark Salo wrote:
I like this pose best even though your eyes are a bit squinty:
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/200304/10/5e5ff027c31e1_m.jpg
Oh yes, I must comment on your big, bold, black, bars!

Lol thanks ! Those big black bars should be cropped out

Apr 22 20 09:21 am Link

Photographer

Dan OMell

Posts: 1416

Charlotte, North Carolina, US

May 23 20 09:53 am Link